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LightOfTriumph


Good authors too, who once knew better words, Now only use four-letter words writing prose. Anything goes. :raritywink:

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Apr
25th
2015

Need someone to copyedit AKG. Right now. · 3:38am Apr 25th, 2015

A fan of mine sent it in to PresentPerfect, he said he'd look at it, because it looked interesting.

Need proofreader. RIGHT FUCKING NOW. Don't know how long it's gonna take him to get to it, but I will not be sunk by GRAMMAR of all things!

Halp!

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That's impressive. I've never had one of my fics looked at by him, but I know he's quite knowledgeable when it comes to stories. I'm not the best at proofreading, nor do I have the time to do so at the moment, but I hope it turns out well. :twilightsmile:

I can do the first chapter.

3014312 .... Okay.... Thank you, but why not the whole thing?:rainbowhuh:

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Because I'm busy, but I just started reading it due to procrastination, and I've already noticed a few errors.

I mean, technically, if you want to impress someone, you only need to show that the first few chapters have good grammar. If he's turned off early in the story due to errors, then you've lost. If your story is good enough, the guy'll be hooked and he'll finish the darn thing, and probably ignore the grammar errors.

3014320 Fair point... I figure he won't get around to it for like a week though... So take your time.

And I hope you enjoy!:twilightsmile:

Here are a few groups you might like to try getting help from, but make sure you pay close attention to the rules for each group:

Looking for Editors
The Proofreader Group
Proofreading, Pre-reading and Editing

Heck, you might possibly even manage to promote your story and get a proofreader in these two groups:
The Shameless Self-Promotion Bureau
I Just Want A Comment

There may even be a few more groups you can try, but those are probably your best options, I think.

p.s. I haven't gotten around to reading the last couple of chapters yet, but I will do so soon.

I already mentioned a few errors in some of the chapters... Want me to re-read the entire thing to look for more?

I'd probably do something, but I haven't even read the entire thing yet and I probably want to do that first.

That and I kinda want to do something else...

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