Quick Wit and White Lie.

So now we're gonna see how Quick Wit handled Celestia and Luna.

While that's happening, and friend and editor of mine is going to write about how White Lie is faring.

You can find him here.

So where Poker Face Stupid Doll is 80% silly, 20% plot, White Lie is 80% plot, 20% Cadence losing it, and Quick Wit is 90% silly, 10% Celestia deciding she's done screwing around but still screwing around while being serious.

So two stories at once, one being a cut away in the Changeling Doll for a bit, and the other being made by someone who's better at not funny plot than me. Super duper fun.

Here's hoping we don't get lazy when it's time to proofread this crap.

Comments

[AppleTank]

sweet

[Magical Trevor]

Wait, so you are saying there is another story happening at the same time? Whaaaaaaaaa?!

[Pickleless]

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Four alicorns received three dolls. I'm gonna show you what happened to Celestia's and Luna's doll. Pierce will show you what happens to Shining's and Cadence's.

[metallusionsismagic]

If your eyes start to glaze and you fear that you'll laze when there's a story trail to blaze...
Have no fear, the Proofreader Group is here!
Shameless plug over. I did it for the alliteration

[Aziraphael]

My body is ready.
i.imgur.com/TUZNvfj.jpg

[The almighty bread god]

COME AT ME BRO.