A proposal about The Proposal

Are more chapters really wanted or needed?

It was meant as a one off piece... I thought it concluded rather well, but there has been a number of comments telling me it was a mistake to leave it as one off... it was just a slice of life sneak peek through a window... I honestly had not counted on it being a full story, but more of a background story within a story.

Not even sure if the story has legs, but there seems to be a demand. To be honest, I don't even know where I would go with those two. And there is a lot of other work to be done.

Comments

[Captain Nibbles]

Moar, we want moar.

[FanOfMostEverything]

It definitely does its job as is. Any more would be gilding the lily.

[SolangeEggbert]

It does seem rather one-shotty and well tied-up for an on-going work.
But then, the same could almost be said for the first three chapters of The Chase. :)

In principle, them popping up in the chaseverse might make sense.

But - there are many other neglected stories outside that verse that could also do with some love.
Blinded by the sun, PLSS, To dance in shadow, ...

[Scootareader]

Turn The Proposal into The Chase 2.0. Make it hit 1M words too.

(don't really the one-shot status is perfect)

[sbloom85]

Leave it as a one-shot unless you want to expand their story some more.

[duithy]

as a fan fic consumer "want more" but aside from brief updates as to there status in the ongoing verse and maybe a clop pony on minotaur fic its done

[anunenka]

What they said. If something involving the two pop into your skull, write that story. Otherwise you should leave it as is. They are a cute couple, and it would be fun to see them (and their calf/foal) in the future.

[kudzuhaiku]

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What they said. If something involving the two pop into your skull, write that story. Otherwise you should leave it as is. They are a cute couple, and it would be fun to see them (and their calf/foal) in the future.

They name him Tirek. He's half pony and half minotaur.

[Laughter Falls]

I would love to see more

[SolidBlackPanda]

It's excellent as it is, but there is potential as a longer story.

[SASsoldat]

I think its ended nicely and no future chapter is needed, im sure they will pop up in the chase somewhere so if we have any question about them it can be explained there

[Emtu]

Maybe not continuation of the story, but I would love to see more random chapters featuring those two.

Somehow I suspect lost chapters featuring them might be popular, too.