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archonix


Nothing real can be threatened. Nothing unreal exists.

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  • 21 weeks
    It's the obligatory new year blog post.

    And yes, I am posting this at around midnight on new year. I have a nasty cold, so I decided to disobey nurgle's one command and stay home.

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  • 36 weeks
    Just for kicks

    I'm mucking around with Lulu for a work-related project (very boring stuff) and thought I would do a quality test with something fun.

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  • 40 weeks
    Oh shit, words

    Or maybe that comma is in the wrong place. I haven't decided yet.

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  • 43 weeks
    The odd things

    I've just been reading through old comments on my scraps story, after publishing yet another chunk from the ancient cutting room floor. It's remarkable how many of the commenters are still around - but also how many logged off for the last time, soon after making their last comment there.

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  • 51 weeks
    But in brighter news

    While I'm not making any promises about any particular project here, I am actually writing again. I figure if I write enough of something, some pony words might drop out somewhere along the line as well. You never know. What I'm working on at the moment is essentially a re-write of a story I read a long time ago; an old pulp sci-fi tale, about a spaceship that manages to get lost in the

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Nov
6th
2014

On a brighter note (probably?) something about writing · 11:58pm Nov 6th, 2014

I've been tinkering with a chapter of No Room For Regret after reading through it again. Nothing changed in the plot or anything like that. I've inlined the translation for that long section of foreign language - and yes it is real, for a given value of real. It's a "constructed" creole of English and isiZulu with a few Xhosa words thrown in for good measure, because I like to tinker with languages from time to time.

I'd noticed a lot of people stopped reading at that chapter for reasons that are probably quite obvious. I could have just swapped in the English translation, but that loses a lot of the impact. Star enjoys speaking it because it feels familiar and friendly compared to where she is now. Removing it entirely would diminish that, I reckon. That and I like to show off.

Even if it is a bit crap... :derpytongue2:

The translation isn't entirely accurate to the original because I wrote it in the creole and then approximated the English version afterwards, but noiw you can at least get that alongside it instead of having to hunt it out afterwards. Yay!

Oh yes, if you're using a dark theme it'll be hard to read because the left_insert and right_insert tags are still weirdly styled. I'm sure that'll be fixed sooner or later. :twilightsmile:

Oh yeah, next chapter is nearly done. So very close...

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Comments ( 1 )

I like that solution. The alignment looks like it's troublesome to get right, but it's worth the effort not having to bounce back and forth between story and footnotes. The only thing I'd watch out for is short lines after the dual-boxing that could be mistaken for part of the untranslated text. The only one I noticed in that chapter was, "I think not, Star Sparkle of Canterlot."

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