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Marshal Twilight


A smut-peddling armchair general with a love for writing and ponies.

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  • 385 weeks
    It's been a while

    Hasn't it? It's been over a year since I posted a story, and longer than that since I actually watched the show. There's a few reasons for it, but I imagine the prudent question is if I'm coming back or not.

    Well, the prudent answer is it's not that simple.

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    18 comments · 1,429 views
  • 432 weeks
    MRW imgur blacklists fimfiction and all my reaction images are there

    All 300+ of them. :facehoof:

    10 comments · 1,051 views
  • 436 weeks
    Marshy's Whiskey Wisdom

    Alright, down 1/3 a bottle of bourbon and bored. So what do I talk about? Uhh, lemme think.

    Okay, oddly enough, whiskey fills my head with sad country music. Look up Whiskey Lullaby. That' s the main one. Technically the only one but my life is young.

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    6 comments · 680 views
  • 438 weeks
    Merry Christmas, Folks!

    Or whatever it is you celebrate.

    Pretty sure it's my turn to be the drunk uncle this year. My scotch is ready. :pinkiecrazy:

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    3 comments · 513 views
  • 447 weeks
    Depression

    It sure isn't just being sad... Honestly, it might not be sadness at all. Feels more like... emptiness. Loneliness. Like nothing matters, and everything is distant. Like being in pain, but there's no pain. A constant sense of just wanting something to be over, even if you don't know what that something is...

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Nov
3rd
2014

Is It Time For PinkiexCelestia? I think It's Time For PinkiexCelestia · 10:18pm Nov 3rd, 2014

Well folks, I did what some might have thought impossible. Marshal Twilight actually wrote a clopfic that didn't have dicks in it. Pink Is Too Sweet is primarily a comedy, but it's got plenty of lesbian smut waiting for you as well (I know why you guys follow me. :derpytongue2:)

Now, those of you who have been following me for a while know that I generally write things that haven't been done before, or at least have been done rarely. A PinkiexCelestia clopfic has been on my bucket list since July or so, and I finally got around to doing it.

Better yet, an especially awesome friend of mine by the name of Cold Blooded Twilight was nice enough to whip up some cover art for me on rather short notice (because, honestly, just try to find PinkiexCelestia to use as a cover image.)

I'm still really impressed at how well the image conveys the tone and mood of the story (the cloppy parts, anyway.) CBT pretty much nailed it on the head, and either way it's still a great piece.

So yeah, if you haven't heard of this guy by now (though you probably have), search for his tumblr. If you're following me at this point I'm sure you can find something there you'll like.

Now, the reason I made a separate blog for this is because this story is a bit different from my recent stuff. To make a long story short, lately I feel as if I've lost my mojo when it comes to writing clop. I've written some stories that plenty of people have enjoyed (nearest and dear to my heart are Working the Stall and Corporal Punishment), but in truth my most recent stories have not been up to par.

Grammatically they're decent enough, but the problem is that they were lacking in other areas. It was difficult to pinpoint why, but I've heard my recent stories called everything from plain to mechanical to generic. The proper smutty details were there, and yet there was something that was simply missing, something that my older stories had that my newer ones didn't.

So in my past few fics I've been experimenting, looking for a solution. Mainly it involved trying new fetishes/kinks, wording choices, and adding additional details. However, the results, while decent, were not what I was looking for. It still didn't have the same appeal as my older works. It was hard to point to what the issue could be, and I was both frustrated and distraught over what seemed to be a decline in my ability.

However, I've been talking with some good friends over the past couple of days while I was working on this new story. To sum things up, I think I've figured out what my problem is. I won't tell you the specifics because I don't want to color any opinions ahead of time, but I would like to see how this story pans out and see if the results are generally better than what I've been producing. The story has been getting views and ratings rather slowly so far, probably because of my splendid decision to post it at 12 AM on a Monday, but I'm hoping that will change in a few hours once we hit prime time.

Just wanted to share my thoughts on these matters, but regardless of how it all pans out I hope you'll all enjoy the story.

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Comments ( 4 )

My body is ready

Needs more dicks.

Well, whatever it was, "Pink is Too Sweet" did not seem to suffer from it.
Although the rest of the story was so entertaining I almost forgot it was going to have clop in it. :pinkiehappy:

Can't wait for more man.

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