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Marshal Twilight
A smut-peddling armchair general with a love for writing and ponies.
Marshal Twilight
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Celestia can certainly own a partner when she wants to.
I kinda wish they would get together, but one night stands are nice too. :D It's also pretty hot. Added to clop folder!
In-fucking-credibly hot.
Continuation please.
This ship had never sailed before... I love it
Hot damn. Count me aboard the F/F train.
CelestialPie is best Pie.
At first I was like
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But then I was like
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Yes it has.
Just... Not in this way.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Quite.
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Shipping isn't my specialty, I'm afraid... I know there's at least one good 'full' PinkiexCelestia fic around somewhere. Can't remember the title though. Try looking in the Uncommon Shipping Pairs group.
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Splendid. The story did what it was supposed to.
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This was the icing on the cake.
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5224980 It had to be done.
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Cloudy Skies wrote a story called Twice as Bright . IT is very good if you want to see this ship again it is a good place to start.
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Ah, that's the one! Yes, I've read that story, and it's quite good. He manages to make the romance convincing while having both Celestia and Pinkie in character the whole time. Definitely worth a read.
To be honest I should have expected her to be this blunt.
Dammit, kid. When I did that quick preread, I left you with things to go over and l look through the fic for. The fact you uploaded it so fast gives me little confidence you actually did that.
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The passive voice issues you pointed out were mostly concentrated in the first few pages and the descriptive parts in the rest of the story. The parts that were mainly dialogue weren't too bad, and the cloppy bits mostly had active voice already. That's why it only took me a few hours to make the changes you suggested.
If there are any mistakes it's because I didn't see them after multiple checks, not because I didn't bother to look for them. I don't ask people to help me and then ignore their advice.
My goodness, this was fun. You had me hooked as soon as Pinkie just blurted the question out.
Yeah this is gonna be clop.
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If it's in the featured box and has a.... questionable cover art, then it's bond to be a clop fic.
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Just about anything in the featured box now is gonna be something like this.
For once, I don't even KNOW what to say about this!
I've read a great deal of clop. From ponies to humans, humans to anthro, anthro to fetishes, I've seen quite the bunch around here. It's not exactly new I suppose, given the about of mature fics that populate this site.
However, this is the first time—I repeat: the first time I've ever seen a Pinkie Pie x Celestia clopfic. Ever!
And you know what? After reading this and experiencing that big change in characters to the genre?
I have no idea what to say. So well done.
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you fucked up 0/10 i award you nothing how could you let this slip you imperfect mess of a human being
on the topic of the story, it was a fun read but the sexy bits didn't do it for me. kinda too generic and too sudden from the prose before it, like you just got bored of writing the setup and wanted to just jump into the hotness.
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Not actually Badger's fault. He was mainly offering suggestions on style, not editing the story itself. Nonetheless, I am a bit irritated at myself for missing a mistake like that. Fixed.
As for the rest of your comment, all I can say is that I usually write smut with a different style than I do non-smut. It might be jarring but I think the cloppy parts are better off when written with additional detail and slightly more flowery language.
As for it being sudden, well, I didn't really 'get bored' of the setup (I actually enjoyed that part the most). Do you have a suggestion as to how I could have lead into it better?
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Fuck's sake. Fixed.
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I was jokingly being harsh on Badger, it's just a typo, everyone's made millions of 'em before.
It's hard with f/f ponies because foreplay is also usually part of the "main dish" per se and you can't really use hooves. The jarring thing for me was the percieved huge switch between "unaroused" and "oh god this feels so good unf more"; there should be more buildup between those two points (in my humble opinion). Intimacy makes hot parts hotter, even if it's narratively just a "one night stand." That's about it, I suppose, though I'm sure there are other things.
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I know you were joking, but since it wasn't his doing anyway I figured I'd just go ahead and mention it.
Also, the part about the foreplay is actually a pretty good point. I was trying to set a fast pace, but it seems I missed a few details along the way. Thanks for the feedback.
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It was very funny, and pretty sexy. Good job!
Celestia did put the soundproof field on before the sexing got started, didn't she?
That entire Day Court scene reminded me of this ---->
I was more like ---->
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Why bother? Her guards are missing anyway, thanks to Pinkie leading them on a wild goose chase.
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Love that video. Celestia's shout was partly inspired by one of Spy's lines.
I don't normally read this stuff, and in all honesty I skipped the sexual bit...but the rest of this freaking made my night, you should definitely write comedy more often. XD Well done sir/madam!
I started reading this expecting it to be pointless clop. What I got was hilarity followed by clop. I am not disappointed!
You may me belly laugh! It may be the booze talking! I am researching pinkie clop tho, so you have helped. My NaNoWriMo is a Pinkie romance fic. With a side of Vinyl an Octavia.
YOU DID WELL! CHEERS! I've drank a pint of Maker's in like... an hour!
It's hard to type.
I didn't get to the clop part (that thing with a foreign ambassador... I know Pinky's oblivious like that, but to me it was just painfully stupid)
Still, the story itself deserves a like.
Also it's a lesson in how important a good story picture is for getting into a feature box.
That's lovely, I'm glad I read this. Twas a fun read and gave me some passive pointers on how to write all saucy-like
Oh my God this was hilarious!
Love it.
Well done dear sir/madam.
geometrically impossible
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Pinkie bangs Celestia, original, I like it. Pinkie's dialogue while trying to bang Celestia, hilarious, I love it. The action of banging Celestia, hot, I really loved this story.
First CelistiaxPinkiePie I have read. It made me laugh. Skimmed the clop... The rest was very good. I'll give you a like.
This was a genuine work of art. Anything that is created from here till time's end shall be inferior to what transpired here, future generations will read this and say, "The Mona Lisa was a prolouge to this magnificence." And I shed a single tear, for this was simply amazing, and from here on out, nothing I read shall be better than this
Moar.
5234175 If you liked this pairing, I recommend http://www.fimfiction.net/story/84903/twice-as-bright
It's also Pinklestia, with no clop but plenty of heartwarming hilarity.
5236807 thanks for the recommendation looks cute. I'll give it a read.
Why sir I do say that that was the best clop fiction I have ever read...