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Wrabbit


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  • 322 weeks
    Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

    Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather

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  • 342 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

    Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.

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  • 343 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

    Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want

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  • 344 weeks
    Slight revamp

    So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.

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  • 367 weeks
    Question for any Italian speakers out there

    So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To

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Oct
22nd
2014

/sigh · 6:35pm Oct 22nd, 2014

First of all, my apologies to those of you awaiting my return. I have been trying to get my muse off her duff so I can get back to writing, but she's very stubborn and quite, quite lazy (like me). I'm sure that some of you have noticed that Twilight's Shipping Goggles has been canceled and this is the reason why. I may return to it someday, but don't hold your breath. By a certain point, I had just lost all inspiration for writing it. I have half a chapter done, and may post what I have eventually, but it's still in need of clean up. No, I'll be moving on to another story, hopefully this time, one that will keep my muse interested. Sorry, everyone.

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Comments ( 10 )

Hadn't noticed it cancelled, and I am sorry that you're tired of the story as it seemed to have a lot of potential.

Hope you muse perks up soon.

;_;


Well, here's hoping for the future then. Maybe someday...

Any chance of you letting us know how it was going to end?:twilightsmile:

What I'd like to see from you, Wrabbit, is perhaps a redesign of the TSW universe. Don't get me wrong, it's a good series, but it loses its focus in the sequels. The first story was a nice little conundrum for Twilight to solve (taking a fourth option in this case), but the other two... well, certain parts seem forced to make a conflict for Twilight to try and solve. Not to mention, the whole existential thing with Twilight being the reincarnation-ish of a past alicorn, or whatever.

I know a redesign is unlikely, but maybe you could go through and clean the stories up a bit?

+Sorry to take advantage of that post, but could we expect some developpment for plain sight story ?

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You and me both, friend. :twilightsheepish:
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::crosses fingers:: :fluttershyouch:
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I'd rather keep that to myself for now, in case I do decide to return to it. :ajsmug:
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They could do with a light dusting, couldn't they? That's definitely something to consider, at least. :twilightblush:
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That's... not a bad idea, actually. Consider my muse intrigued. :trixieshiftright:

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Oooh, Plain Sight. Me gusta.
Maybe a reboot of TSW with her as the focus...

Sad to hear that, dood. Hopefully you figure things out and shower us with chapters.

I'll just sit at my computer trying to determine whether or not I should play Hyrule Warriors, Borderlands, or write, dood.

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It's Tera Online for me. Those Elin are just too dang cute! :twilightsmile::yay::heart:

I has a sad nao.

Hopefully things pick up for you soonish, I always enjoy your stories.

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