Question · 9:03am Oct 9th, 2014
Hello all my Fimfiction Family! Hope you all are having a wonderful and blessed day today so far. Before I begin on the next chapter of Heart of Diamonds, I wanted to ask you all a question. Should I remain writing it in the P.O.V of Rarity and the others, or should I maybe start writing it from first person?
haven't started reading it so i can't say, but changing a writing style during a story cud mess with it, but knowing your story's it be fine
stay classy
2520365 That is true, but I will think about keeping it in the writing style it is now or listen to what everyone thinks. Thank you always for your support.
Maybe a change of pace would be good, but if you don't like it you can always change it back
I would say you should do it based on the situation involved.
I'd recommend against changing point of view unless there's some extremely solid point in the story itself where it would naturally shift. It's a very jarring transition, and should be reserved for times you need to jar the reader. (There aren't many of those.)
You can continue with Rarity's POV if you like. Doing others ponies' POV is always fine. You're the author.
2521148 Thank you for your support always and I think continuing to write in the P.O.V of Rarity and the others would be best now, thank you again.
2520418 Very true my friend, thank you.
2520711 Oh, okay. Thank you very kindly.
2520991 Thank you very kindly for your advice, I truly appreciate it, and that is very true.
i say stick to what you are doing i love the story and don't want to see it change.