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N7_Spartan117


I am 20, Brony, and Christian(And proud of it!). Also I am a gamer to my bones.

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Sep
25th
2014

New Story Ideas · 2:26am Sep 25th, 2014

I have a couple of story ideas I want to try and right, but I am having a hard time choosing which one to write first so I am letting you guys chose which I should write first.

1. Spike and the Fantastic Fillies
(Romance, Adventure, Crossover) Everyone
Staring: Spike, The CMC, Diamond Tiara, and Silver Spoons.

Spike and the CMC get sucked into another Power Ponies comic and become their superhero alter egos, Hum Drum, Song Belle, Fading Bloom, and Silent Wing to defend Maretropolis from Mistress Rich and the Silver Aggressor.


2. A Companions Farewell
(Sad) One-shot. Everyone
Staring: Doctor Whooves and Derpy

The Doctor has had many companions come and go, but never has he had one he wanted to leave or does he?


3. Power Ponies: Heroes of the NextGen! (Story given to me by DarknessRising)
Crossover, Alternate Universe, Romance, Comedy, & Adventure.
Crossover With: The Incredibles(Similar storyline)
Staring:The Power Ponies, Spike, The CMC, OC(kilala97 characters).

Following a Super Registration Act and consequent court ruling, all super-ponies have been forced into retirement and the Power Ponies have been split up. Eventually moving on and starting families of their own.
However, one fateful day the former Power Ponies get a distress from an old ally to help out a high-tech facility gone wrong. Soon, though, they get in trouble and are captured and find out that their old enemies are part of a government conspiracy to rid the world of all super-ponies in an attempt to completely dominating the planet!
Their only hope left for the world rests in the hooves of their children. Starburst must now bring together the children of the Power Ponies. The Power Ponies will need all the help their children can offer to help them save the day!

Characters left to right and their powers they would have( Are subject to change if I find a better character for them.)

Turquoise Blitz (T): Cyclops or Angel
Anthea (Annie): Emma Frost
Crystal Clarity (Claire): X-23
Starburst (Star): Venom( would fight for control over her body with the symbiote.)
Prism Bolt (Bolt or Priz): Iron Man
Cotton Candy (Candy): Blink
Golden Delicious (Gold, Del): Colossus

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Comments ( 47 )

very interesting.

I recommend you write power ponies:next gen ill satisfy all the spike shippers with crusaders of justice

I vote for the first story

Turquoise Blitz (T): Cyclops NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooo! Cyclops is such a massive douche, don't do that to T!

2481667 these are subject to change. Need to put that down.

2481667 I have started to think that T could be Angel.

I'm fine with the order they're listed in.

2481680 That was actually my first thought too when I saw the whole X-Men theme, well until I got to Star.

Power Ponies: Heroes of the NextGen! looks like an interesting one

2481769 Yeah that what I thought when I started to choose which characters they would be like. Star was harder because I had gone through Raven, Deathstroke, and Venom, but still up in the air for her. T I think I will stick with Angel. Now I have to think of names for them.

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I second this vote.

First or last. And why can't the first be its own universe, separate from the show.

Well, being a superhero fan (not fanatic), I opt for either the first or the last. Can't help but wonder why you are giving those new gen characters those particular set of powers. (Not that I disagree per se [except for maybe Starburst], it just strikes me as curious.)

2482131 I'm a little partial to Raven, but without her being a unicorn I can see why you'd reconsider.

2482387 whats wrong with starburst becoming agent venom

2482498 In and of itself nothing, but it seems a little out of her character to me. (Especially with the symbiote feeding on hate) She could have it on her at some point, but I can't imagine her wanting to keep it.

2482524 actually the symboites feed off adrenaline and its not really out of character she takes up the symbiote and the mantel of venom with the legacy of villainy it has to use it to protect her family and threw determination and sheer force of will she gains control of it and swears to use it for good. The reason she keeps it is because she being the only pony to be able to control it just like flash Thompson is of earth 616 she is the one true venom of equestria

2482578 In any case, symbiotes are like werewolves: when the beast lives within you, you can't trust yourself with it. Besides, Brock's symbiote was a psycho amongst the symbiotes.

2482596 actually from what I have read especially from the agent venom series its more like a sterotypical clingy girlfriend

2482603 According to the main continuity (which I only read recently from Wikipedia) symbiotes are a "an unfeeling, conquering race, taking over any species they came in contact with to feed off their emotions; this mainly involved adrenaline rushes from death-defying feats" (courtesy of Wikipedia). Also, part of their power involves 'blocking parts of the host's mind' a good example of this being from 'Spectacular Spider-Man' episode 'Intervention.'
Brief summary: Aunt May had a heart attack and Peter is strapped for cash for the hospital bills. Already being stressed, due to problems in high school and girls, personal issues with Eddie Brock (who here is a good friend) and problems as Spiderman, he decides to take a job from Tombstone (crime boss of NY) to not fight certain crime (Note: the very thing that got Uncle Ben killed). When Flash 'Eugene' Thompson (Pete's bully) calls him on acting like a jerk to his friends, Pete knows something is wrong. The symbiote tries to maintain its hold on him by saying that it has made his life better and that Pete doesn't need anyone else (including Aunt May). Hearing that, he knows the symbiote is affecting and gets it off of him. This being Spiderman, more problems ensue. (Good series, highly recommend watching it Spidey fans)

2482651 Good point, but some of the characters powers are still up for debate like T (I am not sure who he could be other than Angel.) the other option I had for Star was she be like Raven from Teen Titans. Because in the comics Raven was the one that brought the Titans together to form the team. Also The Spectaculer Spider-Man was a great Spidy show to bad it never got a third season.

In my opinion, I would prefer the first one, CMC and Spike as Power Ponies sounds awesome and could play for some laughs, looking like the best out of the three, but it's your call :twilightsheepish:

2483007 I can see Star as Raven and Turquoise as Angel. Although, if you're going by the personalty profiles on kilala97's page, perhaps x-23 isn't the way to go with Crystal (I might be wrong due to unfamiliarity with x-men continuity (As for Spidey: I KNOW RIGHT! Especially the way they ended that series. When they did that, I felt like Fluttershy:

2483105 I think I will go with Star as Raven. As for Crystal as X-23 I remember reading about how she prefers to have her claws out and it made me think of Wolverine for some reason. (Also I would have been ok if they continued Spidey as a comic series instead of that cliffhanger.)

2482651 actually thats the symbiote species in general the venom symbiote personally want to have a perfect symbiotic relationship with its host\partner

2483275 And that's why it's the psycho of the species (and even then it's not above mental manipulation to stay bonded)

2483292 True but isn't Carnage more of a psychopath than Venom.

2483202 I highly recommend against it mainly because raven is magic user and part of stars backstory is that she doesn't feel close with her mom because of she can't do magic I recommend making her a soilder superhero like agent venom or deathstroke

2483299 That depends. If you're comparing it to symbiotes as a whole, to Venom, or to basic human behavior.

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2483292 I could always have it that the symbiote would give Star the ability to use magic, but it be very limited to what magic could be used and the more she used it the more it would slowly start to corrupt her.

2483324 That actually might work.

Write power ponies next gen! please?:fluttershysad:

2483357 It's looking like I might write both Power Ponies and Spike and the Fantastic Fillies back to back. I just need help coming up with names for some of the characters. Annie will be called Annie Frost, Crystal will be called C-23, Prizm will be called Iron Stallion, and Candy will be called Blur. I am not great with names.:ajsleepy: T( now Angel), Star(Venom and Raven hybrid), and Golden are the only ones that need names.

I need to know, who are the next generation's parents? Which one is Fluttershy's kid, or is none of them?

2483440 Crystal(oldest) and T(youngest) are Spike and Rarity. Annie is Fluttershy's adopted daughter. Star is Twilight and Flash's daughter. Prism is Rainbow Dash and Sorians son. Candy is Pinkie Pie and Pokey Pierce daughter. and Golden is Applejack and Caramel's son. Here is there Bio's. They are Kiala97 OC's.

2483465
Ok, thank you sooooo much!

2483324 that would actually make sense with if sunset shimmer was one of venoms hosts and the whole genetic memory thing

2483589 I don't know if I would add that. I kind of got my hands full with the names for T, Star, and Golden. and trying to figure out a good way to write it. I have to the premise but it's the what am I going to write and how it will play out thing. I hope that made sense. I did think about adding Illusion into the mix as Doctor Strange but I think I should stick with what I have.

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2483007 I KNOW WHY DID THEY CANCEL IT also a thing i noticed i think marvel is adding agent venom as a way to gain more attention to a not doing so well product like how in the comics he just joined the Guardians of the galaxy and how he was introduced into ultimate spiderman (the tv show) as a support character because thinking his popularity will atract his fans to watch/read it

I came up with some names

star (raven/agent venom): either venomous angel or angelic venom

t (angel): savior

gold: golden titan

2485478 I like the Venmous Angel and Golden Titan. Not sure about T. Got anything else I may need a new one for Candy since she will be Blink. Her name now is Blur ( I am terrible with names :ajsleepy:)

How about holy drake

And for candy how about tela and she makes the joke that its short for both teleporting and nutela

P.s ever since I suggested starvenom I cant get this image of nighty using his magic to turn himself into surprior carnage (not a story suggestion just something I wanted to share)

2485987 I like. I asked kiala what she thought about names and she has not messaged me back yet, but I think I like yours best. I didn't think to add Nighty into the story, because of it over complicating things but I did start to think of a sequel incase this was successful. PM if you want the hear what I got so far.

2486042 sure I can help you with the sequel and this story if you need proof reader or something im open

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