Some stuff on Stargazing Together · 1:11am Sep 10th, 2014
WARNING: Some spoilers ahead.
I've been looking over my plans for this story a lot as of late. I've thought long and hard about where the story is going, where it will end and how I'm getting it there. And I've realized something.
This is going to be long.
Like, really long.
At least twice as long as the original long.
Pushing 100k words, if not more, long.
Like this is going to be at least a three act story, and we're not even done with act one yet.
To go with that, there is a lot of stuff that I'm covering in this story. After all, Nightmare has only just revealed herself to anypony. She hasn't even begun down the road to recovery, or even gotten off the slow spiraling decent yet. Also, since everyone, human or pony, needs a couple of chances to figure out this whole relationship thing, Nightmare will be having more than one relationship in this story. I may even have Twilight having had some on the side herself.
So, I won't say Nightmare/Luna x Twilight will be the only pairing in here. That would be a total and blatant lie. However, I will say that is where the story is going. We will be going through other pairings. Give me time to get to Twilight.
Now, for those of you who read this far, I have a question.
Currently, Stargazing Together is tagged Teen. It's going to stay that way. However, with where the story is going, and my dislike of stories that gloss over things, for whatever reason other than irrelevance, there are going to be things that go outside the bounds of teen. In Stargazing, I will mention them, things like sex will be mentioned. However, I will not explicitly write them, as that would be Mature, not Teen.
At the same time, I am considering writing a side story of sorts. One which would include the Mature things in it. It would be more like the bits and pieces that are more than I can do in Teen, but still occur.
My question is, are you interested?
I'm always up for more stuff about stories I enjoy reading.
I'm interested alone for the fact that we dont know if Nightmare/Luna even ever had sex before^^ You can have a strong desire for sex even though you never had some before so it'd e interesting (and possibly funny) to see her having her first time and be totally nervous about it^^ If she does have some experience it'll be interesting t see what kind of lover you imagen her to be^^ See her kinks and preferences in bed^^ So yeah, go for it^^ And dont worry about the story being long^^ The way its been so far, this story cant be long enough for me^^
I've always liked this story and concept. That being said I will like it a lot less now without twiluna being a main point in it, especially since right now its just 'lul im horny'
You're kidding. You're kidding, right?
I like this Story and its concept its really interesting. So Yes! I'm interested in more of it and in the Side Storie. Come to think of it, if this "Story" really will get this Big then I won't call it a "Story" i call it a Book and we can never have enough Books
Stories like those are rare on this site. I can't wait for the next chapter but I will wait for it.
Oh and maybe you should add the "SoL" tag to it, after all with all of this coming, it's a good insight of the real life atleast on one side of the Romance road
2443380 I don't intend to turn this into a clopfic, if that's what you're worried about. The story will still be focused on Nightmare Moon and Luna, and what happens to their mind. It's just that life continues whether we want it to or not, and even while dealing with problems of the mind, we have to take care of problems of the body. Nightmare/Luna needs to have experience with a real relationship before being able to make one work, and in reality, if she and Twilight were to get together now, it would end quite badly.
I will admit, given everything, this story may not end with Twilight and Luna in a relationship. However, they will at least be friends. After all, this story is focused upon the Nightmare/Luna relationship.
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Thanks. Glad to hear that there are some who want more.
But but but... mah NighmareXTwilight ! I want it nao !
Just kidding.. partially.
I would be quite...disatisfied... if it didn't end up with these two together.
However , I get what you are saying. As these two are right now , it simply wouldn't work and would end badly for both. For the sake of both some plot development must take place.
So yeah for side relationship , huzzah !
And now , you put me in the interesting position of actually wanting for these relationship to fail in order to bring these two together in the end...
I'm becoming evil because of you.
2444033 who in their right mind wouldnt want more?^^
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I have no idea what evilness you refer to. I would never make someone desire the failings of others. Only a brilliant, evil mastermind could possibly do that. 