Feedback Works Wonders, Folks · 12:42am Jun 7th, 2014
Woke up to 78 alerts this morning.
71 meta, 7 social.
I'm going to bold this next part.
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So, what do you think is going to happen? What do you want to see happen? I make more effort than any other part of my process to incorporate your thoughts into my story.
So let me have it.
More twidash nuzzlies!
Neat! That's really good!
My comment on the story says it all. But to sum it up: Rarity's Revenge.
Sorry but sometimes it takes a while for everything to sink in properly.
I'm with Kudz on the twidash stuff. Cuddling for the win. Shared bath for the awesome, especially if there's wing scrubbing to help with relaxation attempts. But then again that's just what I'd do.
Your Mistress Do Well spinoff works is one of the few stories I follow that actively leave me anxious and looking towards the next update. That in itself says a great deal about the quality of your work.
You've gone from having us believe that Rarity's dead, to showing how subtle sentence statements can come back and bite us right in the ass, and leave us asking ourselves how we didn't see that setup to begin with. I do the same stuff in my current story, and I think part of it is because you do it so well in your own works.
I like that one with the thing....or something.....I think.
Hmmmm. Needs more Alucard.
2182193 I WHOLEHEARTEDLY AGRE MUAHAHAHA!!!! *gunshot*
2182024 this too, for sure
The only things I'm hoping for are:
1) Rarity gets no easy outs. She turned out the way she did, did the things she did, all of her own accord. No magical whammies or possessions or any of that crap - just a mare who broke really bad and then broke everyone around her.
2) Somehow (I have no idea how), there's a reconciliation in the end, even if it's a death's-bed-confession sorta deal. A big part of this story has been how Rarity's games ended up hurting everyone, both the victims and the molesters, and then a big part of Rainbow dealing with her own injuries was helping her friends through their own, not seeking retribution. It would be heartbreaking if the girls couldn't reach Rarity someh-
Okay, on second thoughts, it could work just fine either way.