Bad, Bad News · 3:35pm May 31st, 2014
So... You guys know how I was going to post a sequel of Cool Story Bro?... Well, what I had planned for it didn't pass moderation because it apparently wasn't relevant enough to the MLP Universe.
Last night, I was raging so hard when I got that PM.
But I still want you guys to be able to read it if you want to, so I'll put the story onto a public GDocs for everyone to see, which I'll link right here.
I don't get why it didn't pass moderation, but if you guys have any ideas as to how to change it so it can be posted on this site, that'd be more than appreciated.
Also, seeing as this was a sequel, and I didn't want to make you guys wait, I decided to make this story with multiple chapters. The first chapter is in the link above. So, if you wish for me to continue this story, even if it's not on FIMFiction, then please indicate in the comments of this blog or on my User Page. I'm bummed out that I can't post this story on FIMFiction, but I will complete it if you guys want me to.
Anyways, Thanks for Reading,
-Shadowflame
No! Don't stop! Your an amazing writer I'm sure you can fix this buddy! We believe in you! :)
Hmm, I read the chapter, and I think that the reason this wasn't approved for is because this doesn't implement the actual pony factor into it like you did in the first one. Either you can change the plot a bit to maybe integrate the MLP universe into the actual fix in some way that isn't too far fetch like Twilight and Angela somehow connecting their spells. Or maybe continue writing the chapters and try again once you have introduced the transformation bit for two chapters.
I don't think its because this is in Earth and the only relation to the MLP universe is the show, rather that you haven't implemented a different element that is related to the show. Like the story Love and Tolerate, that is set on Earth and there in pony transformations. So just try again once you have reached the transformation chapter, see if they accept it then.
Aaaw... That sucks!
You really should continue the story, even if you can't get it onto FIMFiction, you're a talented writer, and I love what I've read so far.
When you've written the next chapter, there will probably be enough pony related material for you to be able to resubmit it to the site for approval.
Im sure you can fix it... you can do it
KEEP GOING!
thumbs up so far
A really nice first chapter...
But I have to admit, I can see why it got declined.
Just retry when the transformation has actually started, and I think there won't be any protests.
Been there. People don't realize how hard it is to get a story approved here. Looking at all the shitfics it's hard to believe there's moderation at all, but hoo boy.
Also heh heh... now she has a partner in crime. I wonder why he suddenly needs to help activate it coincidentally getting her contact info that way just for academic interest hmmmm...
Just publish it as a second chapter to "Cool Story Bro."
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Not a bad Idea
There needs to be more. Let there be MORE PONES!!!
Dude, I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Keep going!
Read your original story and the next chapter. It's great.
I think I thought of a way for the next part to get past moderation.
Split the first story into two 8K-word chapters and like others have mentioned already add the next story as a new chapter. It shows to the mods that the lull in pony content is still connected to the greater story that promises more pony.
Loving the story so far; make another sequel! Hopefully the transformation is permanent this time...
Hey, bro. How do we access the next chapters once your done with them?
Yeeaeaeh yknow some times my stories dont get aprovved byt youuj know thats how it rolls. :PPPPPPPPh OOOO