Original Characters · 8:09pm Jun 22nd, 2013
Come on, come all, come and get your very own believable OCs! For a limited time only, I shall be taking Original Character requests! Have an idea you want to implement into a character but not sure how? Send it to me! Let me whip you up a character you would just love to see. And if I think its a good idea and I like the resulting character, I'll even have said character make a small cameo in one (or both) of my stories! Just send me some ideas, no matter how vague, and I'll see what I can do for you! Be sure to include some coloring and special quirks, as well as a suggested cutie mark. If you don't give me a whole lot of details, then I'm just gonna use my own imagination and fill in the blanks for you. Just PM me with the title "OC Request" and tell me of your idea or thoughts! Act quickly, however, as I'll only accept commissions for OCs until the 25th of June!
*Please note that any and all ideas for OCs are going to be reviewed by me and only me. If I feel that your suggestions and ideas wont make for a good OC, or if they are offensive to anything in any way, I reserve the right to politely decline your request.
...Why the hell not. I had an idea that I haven't really built upon.
PM AHOY!
I agree with the above comment. Why the heck not? If you really want to deal with my idea...
huh, well i don't see how it could hurt. ok then, mines a steel grey unicorn with a golden yellow mane and sapphire blue eyes. he's about average height for a stallion, maybe a little taller if you wish, but well muscled. i like to think he's got a whip-cord like strength that allows him to take on most ponies without sacrificing speed or agility. his cutiemark is a sword(your choice what it looks like, but keep in mind he's more of a speed and precision kind of fighter)surrounded by a ring of blue fire. his attitude is surprisingly care-free most f the time, but when shit gets real he becomes deadly serious. his quirks are that he has a serious addiction to muffins, and i actually thought of having him be related to ditzy. i call him, striker Doo, brother to ditzy doo and daring doo.
OK my oc Looks
orange coat, male, unicorn + bat wings(made magically) , yellow eyes, green goatee, crystalline mane and tail green with red streaks, very tall, cutie mark is a two sided Happy and Angry theater mask.
Personality
deadpan-snarker very cynical, likes rock and electric music. Happy Side: care free jokey prankster. Angry Side: Power doubled, more power full than celestia at her best.
Strengths & weaknesses
Great at magic and flying best at electric magic and can command sound to attack
weak against frost and ice cant focus when there is chocolate.
Also his name is Xan
Meh I'll give this a whirl. I actually have two characters so just give them at least a read before judging.
Deadstar:
Cutie Mark: A black star surrounded by a white sphere encompassed by green fire.
Specialties: Summoning spells, decaying spells, and enchantments.
Personality: somewhat without feeling, withdrawn from reality, is gentle yet strong around the innocent, ruthless around those who have lived there lives in corruption or violence. Whenever involved in a war he usually leaves both friend and foe trembling in his wake of destruction and nightmares. Currently a myth amongst the equestrian forces.
Characteristics: A shimmering black coat with ivory white skeletal shaped patches and a void black mane with deep green highlights.
Feather wisp:Has an uncanny ability to tame animals and is skilled in combat, magic, espionage, and wild life.
Cutie Mark: a tattered feather floating in A ash-blasted snow flurry.
Personality: while on mission or traveling outside of Shadowspire she acts timid and weak and is practically a pushover however in combat or in Shadowspire she is calm and happy but forceful and strong.
Characteristics: A ashen grey white main with a teal blue-green coat she is also the only Rainbow Ranger that has an inner glow from having an immense internal reserve of magical energy to call upon so much so that she has to consciously suppress the glow she emits lest she be figured out by those she is designated to watch on her missions. She also uses her own magic to cloak her equipped combat gear.
Ok, I'll bite
Name: Burning Heart, usually goes by Flaming Star
Cutie Mark: A heart made of fire
Race: Unicorn
Colors: Light tan coat with bright red mane
Background: Abducted by a Zebra ambassador because he showed every sign of being an avatar of Iru-Kha the Zebrican god of Fire and Love. Trained for years amongst the Zebrican tribes before being allowed to travel his own path after becoming a true avatar of Iru-Kha. His mane and tail will burst into flames when showing strong emotions, they burn differently according to his emotion. Capable of sharing love through physical contact with other ponies.
Personality: Laid back, very emotional, wise for his years, loves to run, deplores fighting, but is very skilled at it from his tutelage in Zebrica and will fight with a vengeance if he has to.
Quote: "I love everypony, I just hate their actions."
Message me if you want anything deeper.
Name: Molten Iron (or whatever works best)
Species: Pony
Subspecies: Pegasus
Coat: Dark grey with Splotches of Charcoal black
Mane: Bald any kind of mane he had was singed away long ago
Cutie Mark: Crucible filled with molten iron
Job: Works as the weaponsmith for the royal guards making everything from spears and halbirds to swords and axes and beyond. Uses his wings to fan the flames of his forge as well as traditional bellows.
Personality: Somewhat gruff though will open up to anyone who brings up metalworking of any kind or any metallurgical study.
Name: Epic Speech
Species: Pony
Subspecies: Earth
Cutie Mark: A simple megaphone
Coat: Bright Ion White
Job/Talent: Really this is up to interpretation you can do whatever with it. I came up with him listening to the speach Kira Knightly gives tot he black pearl in the third movie as they are about to fight Beckett. So I figured there must be somepony who does morale boosts for royal guard, so why not an OC with that specific talent. See a need fill a need.
All I could come up is a pony that is cynical to the MAX
You already know I don't need help with OCs.
odd, well if you insist.....
1161186 I know you don't Shiro. But some do, and I need to find other things to keep me occupied. Updating two different tales and designing ideas for your collab just simply is not enough to get my mind off Her and Her backstabbing crap.
If I don't find something else to busy myself with soon I'm gonna snap, hence this kind of odd request. Luckily I also start working at a fireworks stand tomorrow, so that'll help.
1161411 This is actually a good idea. I might start doing it to spmetime. Right now, though, trying to get settled in my new house and starting three different stories is kinda time consuming. If you need a little help though, shoot me a PM.
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Name: Cyana Maximilian Flame
Personality: Bubbly pessimist, can be cynical & sarcastic if the situation calls for it
Cutiemark: N/a 'you can use whatever you'd like'
Side note: May have a daughter named Radiant Flame
well there we go
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Name: Mist Remedy
Occupation: Alchemist
Description: Mist Remedy is an earth pony with a love for potions, and his vast knowledge of plants has saved his yet-to-be poison joked flank many times. He lives on the border of the Everfree Forest in a cave, and occasionally travels to Ponyville to sell his potions and pick up supplies.
Name: Blaze Runner
Race: Earth Pony
Gender: Female
Colours: Pure white mane, fiery red and orange body
Background: Originally from the Griffon Empire, Blaze was raised on the streets. Forced into crime to survive, she improved her running and dodging abilities to unbelievable levels. After a street gang came after her parents and their associates she ran to Equestria. She was curious about friendship and how happy and different everything was. She works as a vigilante/guard to civilians in Baltimare, where small crimes are frequent. She loves to adventure and journey. Knows how to fight to a limited extent.
Personality: Can be selfish or mean under stress, strives to be a good pony, witty, determined, will switch sides if things look bad.
Thank you for at least looking.
Might as well do what you asked cuz it sounds fun to have your own OC in the story even if it is only cameo or only a short while
Name: Trigger Happy
Race: Unicorn
Gender: Male
Colours:. Light gray furs, A mixture of gray and silver lined mane(Just like the pic of my avatar)
Cutie Mark: A crosshair with a crossbow bolt at middle of the crosshair.
Personality: Lazy, not very social, and can makes things a bit awkward sometimes. But when given a task to fulfill even if it means breaking a few laws,he's one of the reliable ponies to get the job done at all cost.
Background: Not much is known about him in his early life. He used to serve as a Royal Guard as part of the crossbow unit. But was fired to due to misuse of firearms/crossbows causing several wounded Royal Guards in his unit.Now he works as a mercenary fulfilling different task in Equestria and other nations.
Name: Rex
Race: Diamond Dog
Breed: Doberman
Personality: He's either one of two things angry or bloodlustful
Gear:
Brass armour
Two enchanted axes
Butchers nails
Background: he's used to be a gladiator slave in the red sands mine and as a slave the slave masters implanted the butcher nails that makes him have the temperament that he has, he also has random ticks and spasms or nose bleeds, but when in combat he will go berserk and will not be distinguish friend from foe and will kill anything before him. He escaped his old life and now is a sell sword and leads a warband of 70,00 escaped slave dogs with the same implants and his warriors are just as bloodthirsty. The warband is called the World Eaters. They'll kill anything for the right price.
Name: Guiding Light
Gender: Mare
Type: Unicorn
Cutie Mark: A candle much like my profile pic
Special talent: Light spells/non lethal fire spells
Looks: Average sized, long blond mane, dark body colors and blue eyes.
Personality: Loves the night time, is care free and slightly shy.
Job: Light house keeper
Just want to add somepony you can use in the fighting in the arena. Also, one is a sponsor. Also, I would like them to be used in concurrence to eachother. It isn't necessary, but I would appreciate it.
Name: Moonfire
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Race: changeling, though was once a pony. Uses a grey unicorn foal as his main disguise. Has baby blue eyes.
Cutie Mark: A shield w/ a black, seven pointed star behind it.
Past: Trained under Master Garuda in the arcane arts. Learned hoof-to-hoof fighting from Garuda as well. His father disowned him two years ago when he was turned into a changeling and has been sending assassins after him.
Fighting Style: Drunken Fist.
Signature Move: Jumping above his opponents and raining down balls of blue flame.
Finishing Attack: Throws his opponent up and forms a sphere of blue fire balls around them, sending them forth all at once.
Bio: A loner, Moonfire had hidden himself in the alleyways of Manehattan and became a vigilante, fighting crime and dealing justice where needed, all the while holding accusing evidence against his father's crime ring. Supported by the dragon known as Flare, he has come with proof of his father's numerous crimes. "Nothing will stand between [my father] and justice," Moonfire told the reporter while training.
Name: Flare
Race: Dragon
Type: Ice Dragon
Age: ???
Gender: Female
Coloration: White, light blue.
Appearance: White with a light blue underbelly. Has gold-ish horns and spikes of the same color running down the back of her neck all the way down to the tip of her tail. 9ft tall when standing on two legs, as tall as Celestia on four.
Bio: Not much is known about this enigmatic dragoness. She appeared in Manehattan four decades ago, and has run the most successful bar in the city ever since.
name: blaze blade
cutie mark: a sword cutting through a fire.
colors: fire red,orange,yellow.
eye color: blue.
species: pegasus.
specialties: swordsmanship, fire manipulation, immunity to fire, immunity to heat.
weaknesses: cannot be in contact with large bodies of water as it burns him.
gender: male
personality: when not fighting, kind of a prankster like pinkie or dash, when in battle however, more like deadpool or spider man (as in, makes wisecracks all the time, and acts unpredictable while using his brain)
likes: warm days, sunbathing, and practicing his swordsmanship.
dislikes: THE COLD.
that good enough?
Skyheart is a sky-blue pegasus with a long brown mane. She is a mare, but can be depicted as a stallion if needed. Loves flying, painting and cooking. Doesn't like pain, flowers or neglective parents.
She was born in Flowerfield Square on land to Mrs. Cake and Rarity's father, but was left to the Stormvale orphanage after a year. She learned to fly in Cloudsdale flight camp after the orphanage decided she was a gifted enough flyer to spend the money on. Grew up and reconnected with her father, but recently moved to Ponyville. Unaware that her mother and half-sister live there and just lives normally, clearing clouds and trying to get Rainbow Dash a raise. Paints in her spare time.
Her cutie mark is a pink wing.
Sunshower
Yellow female pegasus with a blue mane. A romantic at heart that works as a weather pony in a town smaller then Ponyville. Her cutie mark fits her name, a sun with raindrops coming from it.
Name: soul speaker
race: Unicorn
coat color: white
mane and tale: neon green
sex: male
eyes: green
cutie mark: two green flames with a gold chain connecting them
Soulspeaker is a private detective in canterlot who has the odd ability to speak with objects, believed to be insane he was sent to a mental institution for a few years were after careful study it was proven true. he was then released and put his power to good use, making evidence into witnesses in crimes, however what they don't know is that soulspeaker should never have been released, because he is getting into the bad habit of listening to objects for advise instead of ponys, and many of the objects seam to have evil intent.
I find it funny how many people didn't read the entire post :3 It's supposed to be a PM, not a comment
1161192 you have a very nice flank......
1180227 Dude, you are talking to yourself. That's creepy.
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I know............
side effect of staying up for two days. 
better now!