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Story Review: Stay Together, No Matter What · 6:06pm February 24th

TStay Together, No Matter What
After a tragic accident with a couple parents, a young boy and his baby sister try to run away, and nearly get severely hurt. But it was up to one pony to make a tough decision when the two human children came to Equestria.
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Synopsis:10 year old Cody McFly who lives in Detroit, Michigan, USA was always taught by his parents to love his family no matter what and ever since he had a new sibling, a baby sister named Flora, life couldn't get any better. One day, things took a turn for the worse when his parents decided to leave the McFly siblings with a babysitter in which they go to a date only for them to be killed by a robber attempting to rob them and they ended up getting arrested. However, by the order of state, the siblings are to be split by the Social Services which doesn't sit kindly for Cody, so in that case, he runs away taking Flora with him. Whilst running away from Social Services, they nearly get into an accident which causes Flora to be severely injured. Luckily, they were taken to Equestria and Cody is turned into a Unicorn Colt and Flora is turned into a Unicorn Filly; however, the change for baby Flora was so severe, it nearly kills her. The Element of Generosity herself, Rarity finds the foals and brings them to the hospital only to discover that the injury Flora has could not be healed. But all hope is not lost, when an alternative solution is found which is for the foal to be reborn. Rarity is put into this new challenge not just for herself and the orphaned human children turned foals, but to her family as well.

Review:Now this is one of my favorite stories in E-Nonymous' Human Child in Equestria Trilogy, because if I were to end up in Equestria and have to take a pony form, I would go for a Unicorn for 2 reasons: Reason #1, I have an extra part on my body that has good use to it and Reason #2, So much spells and tricks to do with a horn on my forehead! But back to the story review, I like on how Filthy decides to divorce Spoiled for good! And what relief from it too because she deserved it along with Suri Polomare for her fraud actions on Rarity too. And the return of 2 human villains puts more suspense in it with the stakes being high due to Rarity in labor.

Overall:This story's rating gets a massive 10 out of 10! Because on the story involving about family, it is filled with suspense and moments of bonding that made me like throughout the whole story. :raritywink:

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