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Feb
24th
2024

Story Review: Saving A Hopeless Soul · 5:20pm February 24th

ESaving a Hopeless Soul
A human boy who has been abused by his terrible aunt and uncle has somehow ended up in Equestria as a Pegasus, and taken in by Rainbow Dash.
Mister E-Nonymous · 29k words  ·  111  8 · 7k views

Synopsis:6 year old Daniel "Danny" Philipps was just your normal kid with loving parents living in Bend, Oregon, USA; but that all changed when one day, his Mom and Dad are killed in a vehicular accident which causes his life to go downhill from here and in this case, he is sent to live Memphis, Tennessee, USA and to be more specific: Hurt Village where his heartless gold-digging relatives, the Regal Couple; Uncle Reginald and Aunt Natasha treat him like a slave than a relative and that causes the poor soul to make a wish in which he is take to Equestria and turned into a Pegasus colt where he is found by the Element of Loyalty herself, Rainbow Dash and that's where truths will be revealed and an all too familiar villain will try to help a heartless couple reclaim their own slave.

Review:When I first stumbled upon this story, my first guess was that this is just some boring Human in Equestria story, but it was not. I'll admit when I read it, I was hooked on it and I couldn't stop reading it until I finished the whole story. This story shows that Rainbow Dash can have internal conflict on her if she wants to take this orphaned child as a mother or not, knowing that it will have a massive effect on her and Danny. And Jesus Christ! Doesn't Natasha and Reginald remind you of Vernon and Petunia Dursley from the Harry Potter franchise and how Danny is like Harry? Lucky for the abusive couple there wasn't a Rubeus Hagrid like figure to stop them in their tracks.

Overall:In my rating on this, I'd give a 9 out of 10. It was okay for me, but it was a good story overall. Simple yet entertaining to read in my honest opinion! :rainbowwild:

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