Apr
18th
2023
Editor Found! · 2:57pm Apr 18th, 2023
Ladies and gentlecolts alike.
I am happy to let you all know that I have found an editor! The chapters will be so much better now, and we will begin work redoing all four chapters and the prolouge.
The story has not changed, or things you know. However the chapters are going to to be redone in small and big ways.
The latest chapter has already been reedited, and will be updated in a few hours. :)
So thanks a lot to SoloBrony, who has already done a lot of awesome work!! 
Neat
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But always check the result. I had at one point 6 volunteer proofreaders and the results was apperently not first cream...
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That goes without saying.
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I wouldn't ever allow an author to post something I had edited and they had not double-checked. I think I might have even annoyed him slightly with how much tentative editing I did, heh.
Good advice from you.
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Better once said before twice regreted...
I speak from a poi t of experience. Like my Subnautica story thst got downvoted into oblivion...
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Mostly becsuse there is always that one typo or auto correction the first or second read through didn't catch...
Congrats!
Glad you got the additional help. Quite enjoyed the original draft. Excited to see it with a fresh coat of polish, as well as what lies ahead.
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We have finished and updated Chapter 4. It is so much better now. :)
We are working on the Prologue now, and I think the story really flows and pop more. It is also a great learning opportunity for me.