Roni is a simple stallion, living a peaceful life in the Everfree Forest, not far from Ponyville. He lives in a decent house, alone, and loves pasta. He owns a humble restaurant in Ponyville, where they serve — you guessed it — pasta.
Roni is attacked. Fear pumps through his body, causing him to weaken at a crucial moment, and break down emotionally.

This was done for the Cliffhanger Contest in The Writing Lab group on FIMFiction. It was done hurriedly, but nevertheless, I would like some critique, if that's okay.

Any and all critique or general feedback is greatly appreciated! Thank you for your time!

A human is transported to Equestria, deemed “useless”, and transported back.

Twilight overdoes it on a simple half mile teleportation spell and ends up where no pony has gone before. Or wanted to go.

Hearth's Warming isn't always cozy. As Lyra waits in Canterlot after stupidly missing her train, she must prove to a certain dark blue princess that she really does love another mare.