Thanks for the follow!

Here to make your day 'cuz why not
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No problem, keep up the ecelent work!

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Holy wow, I enjoyed this response a lot! Thank you so much for your opinion and I'm glad you like it enough to take some time and express yourself properly. It means a hell of a lot to me, and I'm happy to hear that you're looking forward to more as well!

I'm not entirely certain I can pinpoint exactly why this is such a good story. One thing that definately intrigues me, is the fact that it keeps me guessing. Its not as straight forward as I assumed when I started reading. For instance, even though you have Celestria lyin and toying with Marcus a bit, she isn't necessarily malicious. I alsolike the fact that you show Marcus stuggling with the choices he makes and, the consequences that come with them. Though its not to riddled with morality and emotionthat it distracts from the good ol' pony action. I'm sure I could say more, but the bottom line is that your story is very well thought out and the writting reflects that.

P.S. I like the optional book excerts, They are well worth a read in their own right.