Apr
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2013
Creation - Feedback, What I did right or wrong, ect... · 4:19pm Apr 17th, 2013
Alright Everypony, so far the story seems to be getting a fair amount of positive feedback. Now my question is: Why?
I'd like to know what you liked or didn't like about the story.
Oh, and for everypony who wants more, don't worry, I'm not even a forth of the way done with the first time line.
If you want updates on the stories progress simply ask.
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King_Blood_I · 363 views
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Alright, so here's the deal, I'm writing a long ass story about my Oc. I stopped "The Blood Chronicles" because I didn't really like writing about my Oc as a human and then I stopped "Wild Beauty" because it was for a pony I no longer love. I have entitled the new project "Blood - Creation". So far I have created about 14 new Oc's to cover a long time span. I'm still not done ether. The project is hard because it spans all across time. If I had a timeline for the history of Equestria it would be a lot easier. The story may become gore at times and during the early pages you'll notice the primitive ponies can speak English. That is because Blood is able to understand them and grunts or stomps don't make a interesting conversation. I'm not sure how long the story will be and unlike my previous stories I'm writing a lot more before I even release it. Well I hope y'all are looking forward to it.
Meow when we see an update
18662 can do
15745 Dude Im need you to read over my next ch before I post it
Chapter 3 is done but I may have to change some things (grammer errors ect..) if you find them send me a pm so I can fix them. Enjoy you new chapter!