Creation - Feedback, What I did right or wrong, ect...

Alright Everypony, so far the story seems to be getting a fair amount of positive feedback. Now my question is: Why?
I'd like to know what you liked or didn't like about the story.
Oh, and for everypony who wants more, don't worry, I'm not even a forth of the way done with the first time line.

If you want updates on the stories progress simply ask.