Alright Everypony, so far the story seems to be getting a fair amount of positive feedback. Now my question is: Why?
I'd like to know what you liked or didn't like about the story.
Oh, and for everypony who wants more, don't worry, I'm not even a forth of the way done with the first time line.

If you want updates on the stories progress simply ask.

Alright so after being shot down in my last story I have decided to write about my Oc Blood. I personally know that everypony hates my Oc for being an Alicorn named Blood. If anypony feels like proof reading or editing just ask. So far I have 3057 words so I think I'm doing good.