Okay, Schmaltzy baby, I gotta say something. I've been digging this story so far, if only for the Rule 63 aspect giving it a special twist. And up 'til now, you haven't been the least bit shy about describing the sexy scenes, whether they're M/F, M/M (as unwilling as it was), or even incest. Also, huge breasts. Enough said.
However, what you have here is not a satisfying ending, and I'm sure my sentiment is echoed by a number of readers. While the action and adventure aspect was loads of fun and rather kinky, I think that ever since we saw the first scene involving Bolero and Gleaming while Dusk watched, we've been waiting for the scene where the three of them had some fun. You left the characters in the same state as the readers: all worked up, but with no payoff. Now, I know I can't force you to do anything, but I feel like this story would be way, way better if you showed us Bolero giving both of the boys a good time. That would be the most satisfying conclusion.
Again, love the story so far, but in my opinion, this isn't complete just yet. Hope to see more from you in the near future!
>changling claims to have become more powerful than fucken solaris from sex draining of male cadance >gleaming shield punches him in the face and he's down on the floor ......
Honestly I was kind of hoping for some Nymph-on-Gleaming action, too. He may be gay, but he pretty much has to to get her love. Potential for a hot scene and some humor as he's forced out of his comfort zone with his own captive.
Then the Dusk-save, and finally the threesome.
That's pretty much what I was hoping for... not this sudden "eh whatever let's wrap it up" we got in the end.
Can you please give us that threesome scene? I was waiting for that, and you had to go ahead and prematurely end the story! Dusk-Gleaming-Bolero threesome please!
NO.FINISH THE LAST SCENE.
is this a reference to the cliffhanger guy...?
WD-40 spell?
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Sure, it'll just cost you
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I have no idea what you're talking about.
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its from this...but im guessing you didn't really put it in knowing about it my mistake :P
Okay, Schmaltzy baby, I gotta say something. I've been digging this story so far, if only for the Rule 63 aspect giving it a special twist. And up 'til now, you haven't been the least bit shy about describing the sexy scenes, whether they're M/F, M/M (as unwilling as it was), or even incest. Also, huge breasts. Enough said.
However, what you have here is not a satisfying ending, and I'm sure my sentiment is echoed by a number of readers. While the action and adventure aspect was loads of fun and rather kinky, I think that ever since we saw the first scene involving Bolero and Gleaming while Dusk watched, we've been waiting for the scene where the three of them had some fun. You left the characters in the same state as the readers: all worked up, but with no payoff. Now, I know I can't force you to do anything, but I feel like this story would be way, way better if you showed us Bolero giving both of the boys a good time. That would be the most satisfying conclusion.
Again, love the story so far, but in my opinion, this isn't complete just yet. Hope to see more from you in the near future!
2642885 SECONDED. SHAMELESS CLOP MUST BE FINISHED.
>changling claims to have become more powerful than fucken solaris from sex draining of male cadance
>gleaming shield punches him in the face and he's down on the floor
......
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"WRONG 100 BILLON DOLLARS"
I guess you could say... It was a real explosive ending?
That sounded much wittier in my head.
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Agreed, all in all this feels like a lazy ending.
Honestly I was kind of hoping for some Nymph-on-Gleaming action, too. He may be gay, but he pretty much has to to get her love. Potential for a hot scene and some humor as he's forced out of his comfort zone with his own captive.
Then the Dusk-save, and finally the threesome.
That's pretty much what I was hoping for... not this sudden "eh whatever let's wrap it up" we got in the end.
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I was already way behind on my schedule and didn't want the fic to be dragged out too long. Another sex scene felt unnecessary.
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Magical strength =/= Physical strength
2643069 man, that's so nostalgic
2644839 When i saw that line i was immeadiatly reminded of this show *brings back memories* those were the days...
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Three-Way would have been a perfect ending for this story. >_>
2645202 Yeah go ahead dusk we wont tell Solaris Will we darkangel, especialy if they try the "spells" used earlier in the story.(B.E. Wink)
2644245 ok , so why didn't he fry her or something when she punched him :l ?.....
2644245 I understand...trust me, I do. But if you can find any time in your schedule, I think a lot of us would love to see that last scene.
No pressure, just a bug in your ear.
Should Have an Alternet Ending Where Nympamos wins
Fun read overall. Bolero seems pretty homophobic for the Prince of Love.
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Okay, here you go!
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NOW GIVE ME MORE CLOP!!
Wanna know something funny? I broke my pinkie on my "special" hand and i was kinda relieved we didn't have a sex scene.
WOO....kinda. XD
And they all lived happily ever after.
You know....I don't even know what I was expecting....at all....
Let's just say King Nymphomanos isn't my thing....
Can you please give us that threesome scene? I was waiting for that, and you had to go ahead and prematurely end the story!
Dusk-Gleaming-Bolero threesome please!
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No incest this time? Surprising. Still, grammar and plot (lol, pun) are just about perfect.