The frozen wastes of Stalliongrad teem with conflict and strife as pony, machine, and the wild battle ferociously for control. One unicorn, on a mission she did not ask for, makes her way into Tartarus itself.
Every memory I ever had of Clover dripped through me like acid.
That's a bingo!
Dawn poked her head in, that smile ever present, if strained from recent events.
Had she not heard the gunshot that was fired just seconds ago? What are those doors made of?
“I’d want justice. I would want the pony responsible to pay for what they’d done.”
Having Silver ask her friend about her hypothetical decision to go out for revenge is a small detail that could have easily been skipped over. Yet it speaks volumes about Silver's mindset that she did ask. It seems rather fitting that the most virtuous of the herd would try to reason around her personal motivation with something about the greater good or the indirect consensus of a close friend.
I could only hope so.
Even with that little shred of doubt, Silver could have thought to bring the 'demon construct' with her. To learn more about it.
I seemed to have mistaken Harmonics for Clover in my comment on Chapter 2. A major oversight on my part!
Onto the chapter proper, the aftermath of the incident is portrayed rather well. Everyone is sad, as expected, but the vibe is not overbearing angst. The dominant feeling is that of anxiety; of course, the stable inhabitants should now be wondering about their mortality and the security they have. Too bad they were still too naive to leave even one pony by the prisoner.
Silver's choice to exit the stable is handled characteristically, remaining true to her morals, her mentality, and her sense of responsibility as the priestess. There are numerous hints to the great potential this character has for her development. The subtle hints of corruption were especially enjoyable, seeing as they were woven skillfully into the narration.
Now comes the hardest part: breaking in the newcomer to the wasteland.
On another note, is the title purposely done like thay?
Usually it should be fallout equestria: *inserttitoe here
That's a bingo!
Had she not heard the gunshot that was fired just seconds ago? What are those doors made of?
Having Silver ask her friend about her hypothetical decision to go out for revenge is a small detail that could have easily been skipped over. Yet it speaks volumes about Silver's mindset that she did ask. It seems rather fitting that the most virtuous of the herd would try to reason around her personal motivation with something about the greater good or the indirect consensus of a close friend.
Even with that little shred of doubt, Silver could have thought to bring the 'demon construct' with her. To learn more about it.
I seemed to have mistaken Harmonics for Clover in my comment on Chapter 2. A major oversight on my part!
Onto the chapter proper, the aftermath of the incident is portrayed rather well. Everyone is sad, as expected, but the vibe is not overbearing angst. The dominant feeling is that of anxiety; of course, the stable inhabitants should now be wondering about their mortality and the security they have. Too bad they were still too naive to leave even one pony by the prisoner.
Silver's choice to exit the stable is handled characteristically, remaining true to her morals, her mentality, and her sense of responsibility as the priestess. There are numerous hints to the great potential this character has for her development. The subtle hints of corruption were especially enjoyable, seeing as they were woven skillfully into the narration.
Now comes the hardest part: breaking in the newcomer to the wasteland.
10 bits on the stable being a hellhole when she return because she left the gun behind and it is now used to run a dictatorship!