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Again... you have pleased me greatly friend author. This is good and I hope to see more of this excellent caliber coming from you. Though I would like to request that you wait till after all the dates have been completed, with perhaps some more light filler between them before you drop a drama bomb on them.
They say that to little calm before the storm is to prove that it will only be a sprinkle but, the longer the skies are clear the worse the rains shall be. (Forgot who that was but, it's basically what I meant. Make the readers wait for the shit storm because it will be epic level when it hits... find your moment and bide your time.)
This advice has been brought to you by your friend and local sick bastard - Camlio
Oh boy hes going to have to make a choice between the girls isn't he...*sigh*
2320513 i would be happy to allow you to use my OC in ur story. Just make sure he stays in character, he has habit of wanting to get out of character at moments. If you haven't noticed. Wink wink.
2320646 haha. thank you sick bastard. haha.
2320734 Id dont know, we shall see. haha. I hope you are enjoying it so far. its at about 20,000 words now, so it is officially my longest fic, and still going. heheh. Im happy with it.
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Well, I didn't mean for you to actually call me that...
But, oh well, I sort of set myself up for it I guess. You're welcome in any case.
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I am enjoying it...
But I don't see a sad or tragedy tag. so that's something right.
right...
Haha Dear Agony, huh? Didn't know you listened to Breaking Benjamin. Cool choice I say. But anyways this was pretty fun to read. 1 of the 3 dates left. I wonder what you'll do for it.
I hoped the choose don't involve he becoming a pony, I grow to like him as human, and I'm pretty sure the girls too. Hey next one did you will post Luna or Celestia date? I'm curious about what you have in store, also if Twilight will love him as the rest of the girls love him now
2320932 Yes that is something. haha
2321072 I'm sure you can guess what I have planned for the next date.
2321263 I'm sorry to say it, but Twi will not be with Alan, she will join the herd to be with Luna. Sorry for the spoiler alert. heh heh.
I have a feeling you will all enjoy the next chapter.
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But…Luna loves Alan, did she also loves Twilight or is she only being condescend? Because this a terrible way to help Twilight move on.
Trust me, be in a relationship were is not loved, things only end bad, and is cruel for both parts. Luna already love Alan, even if she loves Twilight…well its kind of wrong, think about it, herd or not, what are you basically saying is your best friend has a crush on your girlfriend that just start to be your girlfriend so the solution is that he had sex with your girlfriend. Its just weird and wrong to a great degree.
You know what a better option would had being. That Twilight and Luna will talk about it and Luna help Twilight move on, it will be much noble and will not complicated thinks the way you are making it.
In fact so far that will not affect that much your story, just a suggestion plus it could improved it
2321982 You know, that's not such a bad idea. thanks. I'll keep that in mind. And your right, it wouldn't be able to work. at least not at first. There would be too much stress.
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Exactly, besides it will not be interesting finding Twilight a match? Perhaps Trixie or Zecora, to name a few.
Or Big Mac or Soria to name a others few
You can choose males or females, what ever suits you
2322209 I actually was thinking of placing Twi with one of my other OC's: Night Shade. What do you think? should I or shouldn't I?
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I said go forward, that could be interesting, like a sub plot to follow. Just treat the subject carefully is a delicate situation
Just a question Night Shade is a mare or a Stallion? Because if it is a stallion it could do a little twist if in one point Twilight get pregnant
2322227 Yes Night is a stallion. You can tell if you read my fic star-gazing. Its the not so great one-shot I wrote.
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I see, well if you pare him with Twilight I bet more people will be interesting of reading your other fic, I Think it will be a good idea, and that way you avoid the unnecessary stress and like I said, gain an interesting sub plot going
2322262 My god! That just might be Pinkie enough to work!!
2322262 aight well im going to head to bed. its getting late. haha. night bro. new chapter tomorrow.
2320734 muffin is best pony!
I loved this chapter it was sweet and cute. I can't wait to see what happens between them all and to them all next it was a beautiful date.
Rarity likes the fact that Alan is "long, srong, and like to get the friction on". Yea I just quoted Sir Mix A lot song.