Why is he freaking out if he voluntarily went through the Multiverse Portal? If I had done that, I would've personally expected much, much freakier shit than talking animals.

2241781 you are right like floating brains in purple water, and flying poop like things, or Minecraft. okay the first one is toooooo strange

2242491 I considered your analogy, but after reading the event over in the story, it doesn't make that much sense. It's more like volunteering to be the first person to go to any universe ever, but instead of going to Universe A, you f*** up and go to Universe B instead. Given you didn't know the infinite variables of either Universe, volunteering means preparing yourself mentally for anything from talking animals to hell spawn. Given how bad reacted to the former of the two, I consider him lucky he didn't wind up anywhere else (though we all knew he was heading here in the first place).

I would say whether or not one would loss their s*** getting tossed in a new place can depend on the nature of the place itself. Like in a end of the world demonic hell-hole or a bright and sunny place of peace and tranquility, whether or not brain will interpret itself being in life threatening place but that just my opinion.

for your information there are horses in saddle arabia it's in the show. you should check it out

2245696 Thank u for the tip, but i like this the way it is.

2247987 well, it's your story

I like this story, but it needs more...... SPLOSIONS!

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But in all seriousness I like this story and would love to read more

ten-fold

xif this was any more I would've called BS. Reasoning; normal air pressure is 14(point something) psi or about 100,000 pascal or 10kPa ten fold would be 1mPa. Now considering 33ft is one atmosphere underwater so you would times that by ten and get 330ft or 10 atmospheres. Only skilled deep sea divers can go that deep, so an average joe suddenly having that much pressure is almost impossible and still survive. Not to mention that his ear drums would explode as a way to try to equalize with the air pressure outside. Science lesson over xD

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FUCK YEAH

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you and your damm logic

"What are you?" it asked.
I passed out.

Managed to get a laugh out of me...well-played.

What's the purpose of the switch from third-person to first-person partway through the first chapter? Nothing in the first section of the chapter required third-person perspective to tell properly; everything could easily be translated to first-person with minimal changes.

I love this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next to them all and between them all.This has me cracking up.

2241781 I know right it would be obvious you see wired and just except it.And if there sending him to another universe you think they give him equipment to service just in case.

:You better hope so, or i swear if I die in this thing, then I will come back and haunt you."

Quotation mark missing from the beginning of You and capitalize the i. Other than that I'm interested in this so far.