Balance is key in all things. Light and Dark, Good and Evil, HLF to PER to Equestria. What do you do when a species shows up happy to tilt the scales in your favor... knowing you might have to fight your family?
I... well... I... *gapes a bit, then shuts his beak* fine... guess I can't say no, can I? Thank you, my friend... if there's anything I can do to repay you, let me know?
I'm liking what I'm seeing so far. I like your own personal spin on the interaction between Gryphons. I can't really make any critiques or comparisons between your story and GG's so far since even I don't have as complete a grasp on gryphons as GG does. The only issue I keep seeing is the occasional missing end punctuation marks on a few sentences. If you are interested in having an editor, feel free to PM me for details.
I don't usually track stories that are marked 'mature,' but I am in this case. Heck, I usually leave the 'view mature' tag off. But in this case... Yeah, let's see where you go with the ideas.
2036791 Yeaaaah, I may skim those parts. I'm not interested in most bloody horror or clop stories, and keeping the 'view mature' button off means I don't have to scroll past them.
2036856 So long as it isn't too detailed, I don't see why that can't be rated "Teen." Just be careful how you aim the 'camera' to not focus on the bloody bits.
It lives! Excellent!
>a Noble Cause story
>all_of_my_yes.jpg
This certainly has caught my eye, looking forward to where this goes
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This is the story I've been working at for... a couple months now. Working on chapter 3 as I type. You think it's better?
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You flatter me!
I thought Andrew opted to go pony. Do you mean Jason and or Jenna?
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Only as much as is due
And how you been man? haven't seen you in a while
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Damn, thanks! Missed that in editing! Fixed!
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Life's been rough, to tell the truth. Eating ramen for a few weeks at this point, but... we'll manage.
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*pats* Well, you need help, just gimme a shout
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*blushes* Thanks, my friend... but unless you have some good finances stashed away that you're willing to part with...
... frankly, it all comes down to finances. Depressing, in that regard.
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Well, none right now, bills made this last paycheck vanish, but I'll see what I can pencil out of the next. Won't be much though
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You don't have to give me anything, man... I wouldn't want to be a bother. I just need to tighten my saddle straps, as it were...
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No worries about it, would be more of a bother knowing a friend needs help and I could, but don't
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I... well... I... *gapes a bit, then shuts his beak* fine... guess I can't say no, can I? Thank you, my friend... if there's anything I can do to repay you, let me know?
I swear I thought the top bird was Falco.
Alright, I was wondering when this was going to be posted, and now I look forward to it. Has everything I loved in Option Gamma from the looks of it.
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If you can find someone good at drawing diamond dogs, I would love to chat with them for a commission
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I have better aim than Falco could dream of.
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I hope you like what you see!
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I'll see what I can do!
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Thank you much! Since I'm enjoying writing diamond dogs more and more, figure I'd want one for an avatar
Oh yes, i must read
Just got time to read it. Very much looking forward to more!
I'm liking what I'm seeing so far. I like your own personal spin on the interaction between Gryphons. I can't really make any critiques or comparisons between your story and GG's so far since even I don't have as complete a grasp on gryphons as GG does. The only issue I keep seeing is the occasional missing end punctuation marks on a few sentences. If you are interested in having an editor, feel free to PM me for details.
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Drat it... I know that and grammar are my weak points, but I thought I'd fixed that. Thanks, Midsy.
I don't usually track stories that are marked 'mature,' but I am in this case. Heck, I usually leave the 'view mature' tag off. But in this case... Yeah, let's see where you go with the ideas.
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The only reason it's marked as such is because there's a few bloody sections within the tale. Not a lot, but enough to make some wince.
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Yeaaaah, I may skim those parts. I'm not interested in most bloody horror or clop stories, and keeping the 'view mature' button off means I don't have to scroll past them.
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It's mostly... hm... losing a limb, and getting shot. Nothing you wouldn't see in a standard action movie.
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So long as it isn't too detailed, I don't see why that can't be rated "Teen." Just be careful how you aim the 'camera' to not focus on the bloody bits.
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Well, the first bloody bit is going to be probably in chapter four, so... we'll see how that shakes out.
Hehehehe. Definitely looking forward to watching this one play out.