Rainbow slowly regained consciousness, and was immediately aware of somepony talking in the same room to a group of other ponies; she didn’t open her eyes just yet, as experience had taught her not to jump into any situation before assessing it thoroughly. While this particular time probably wouldn’t result in any pain on her part, some lessons were in ground to deeply to forget.
“We have done all we can to stabilise her, but we can’t do anything due to the strange clothing she’s wearing. We tried teleporting her out of it, but it seems resistant to our magic, and is also very resistant to any methods of cutting we tried to get it off. All we can say at this point is she is stable, and it is definitely Rainbow Dash under there.” A voice said, apparently a doctor of sorts.
“Please, let us know when she wakes. Myself and the 5 girls will be waiting outside.” Spoke another voice, this one however Dash recognised as Princess Celestia.
Figuring that she was indeed perfectly safe, and nothing was going to happen, Rainbow slowly opened her eyes. What she saw instantly brought tears to her eyes. Standing around the foot of her bed was a doctor, the two Princess’s, and her five best friends in the whole world, scratch that, the universe, she had seen enough of it to know that. No-pony noticed her open her eyes initially, but slowly a straight haired Pinkie Pie looked over and noticed Dash’s eyes were open. In under a second her hair poofed back out to its usual messy disposition, and a smile to rival Rainbow's when she returned broke onto her face.
“DASHIE!!!” Screamed the pink mare, in a voice that would put Luna’s royal Canterlot voice to shame.
Pinkie jump up and ran towards the bed, as the other seven ponies looked around in shock.
“Darling” Rarity screamed, in an unusual display of ‘uncouthness’
“Sugercube” AJ exclaimed, also leaping towards rainbow.
“Rainbow” Twilight called, also making a move towards the bed
Fluttershy didn’t say anything; instead, a pink and yellow blur rushed over to Rainbows bed and engulfed her in a hug, tears streaming down her cheeks.
“Hey guys, long time no see huh” Rainbow laughed, “if you guys could just move quickly I could get up and return your hugs properly”
“Oh no, you are not getting out of that bed, we don’t know what’s wrong with you, but you pas…” the doctor started, but was cut off by Rainbow.
“Relax doc” Dash reassured “I know what caused it, it’s called being tired."
With that, Rainbow pushed the covers away from herself and got out of the hospital bed. As soon as she had done so, the six friends all dived at each other, culminating in a group hug, with tears filling eyes around the room.
“I thought I, I lost you” Stammered Fluttershy through her tears
“Yeah, I’m sorry about leaving, although I didn’t really want to per say” Rainbow said apologetically.
After what felts like hours the six mares broke apart, and stood back from Rainbow Dash, and got their first proper look at her. Rainbows mane was cut much shorter than it used to be, but was still as vibrant as ever, her face on the other hand was covered in scars, ranging from small barely noticeable ones to a large one that went from above her right eye to the middle of her muzzle.
The rest of Rainbows body, including her wings, was clad in a form fitting suit of armour, that while much slimmer and softer looking than the angular and bulky armour the royal guard wore, looked much sturdier, backed up by the multitude of scratches and small dents all over it. What drew most of the ponies eyes however, was the big ruby type stone set into the middle of the chest piece.
“So Rainbow, what happened?” asked Twilight, “everypony thought you were dead after your stunt at the Wonderbolts show and what is the, thing, you're wearing?”
“Yes,” Rarity piped up, “I must say even in its current state, it is a work of art, beautiful, but ominous at the same time, and that crystal” Rarity started staring at the crystal longingly.
“I’ll get to that, but first, can I get something to eat? I haven’t eaten anything since, ummm, well two weeks ago, unless you class what my armour makes as food, and FYI guys, you shouldn’t”
“Huuuuuh” Pinkie gasped “No cake for weeks, quickly, there’s no time to lose” and with that Pinkie ran over to the wardrobe, flung it open and dived inside.
“Um, guys,” Rainbow asked slowly, “Did pinkie just jump into a...”
“I found it” Shouted Pinkie happily, emerging from the wardrobe with the biggest cake any of the assembled ponies had seen, and considering Celestia was there, that was saying something.
Before anypony could react, Rainbow had literally dived into the cake, and began to eat it like a pony possessed while the others stared on in awe.
***
2 minutes later
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Rainbow sat in a pile of cake, smiling happily before burping loudly and standing up.
“That was, interesting dear” Rarity remarked, slightly shocked at the speed at which Rainbow had eaten the cake.
“You’re darn right thar Rarity” AJ agreed.
“Now you have eaten, my dear subject,” Celestia spoke, “I believe you were about to tell us what happened after you performed your sonic Rainboom”
“DOUBLE Rainboom, your highness” Rainbow corrected, “well, after my double Rainboom, I landed in a jungle, well crash landed anyway, from what I saw the place stretched on for miles in all directions.”
“How did you survive” Luna asked
“With a lot of help”
“From who?” Twilight asked.
“An Exodite, or more specifically an Eldar named Elarique”
“What’s an El-Dar?” Fluttershy piped up
“Well, for that I guess I should start at the beginning” Rainbow smiled.
***
Elarique quickly rode through the forest, the invasion was not going well, and he had to secure the World Spirit. As he neared the sight of the node he was tasked with protecting, a flash of light and a boom was heard over the forest and a rainbow coloured streak of light plummeted to the ground.
Elarique heard the crash and began to move faster until he reached a clearing with a monolithic rock in the middle. Lying next to the rock in a small crater was a mass of Light blue fur, with a Hormagaunt standing over it.
ELDAR WITCHES, BURN THEM ALL!
epic!
this should probably be "and what is that...thing your wearing?"
also consider doing a bit of a edit, or possibly getting a proof reader.
part from that, this looks interesting
story in my opinion is going waay to fast
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I agree... Never trust the filthy xenos
This is why comma's exist!!
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“Now you have eaten my dear subject,” Celestia spoke, “I believe you were about to tell us what happened after you performed your sonic Rainboom”
Yeah, I'm a latecomer to the party, but I was going to comment on that. It still looks like someone ate Celestia's Subject. :-/ perhaps, "Now that you have finally ate, my dear subject?" :-/
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I swear I fixed that already. Done now.
What happened to the cat from chapter one? RD seems awfully unconcerned about the fact that it's missing.
Dash should be big.
Is he a shining spear?
HOLY SHIT DASHIE RODE A DINOSAUR!? Epicness, REIN-FUCKING-CARNATED.
Rainbow Dash joined with Eldar, because she isn't good enough for the Imperium of Man!
While the Eldar are far from my favorite 40k faction, I'll admit that the space elves are starting to grow on me. And wow, does this chapter (Ch.2) needs some reworking, especially at the end. Show, don't tell. We're getting a lot more telling then we are showing. Expand upon the scenario, what is Elarique ridding on exactly, what's his armor look like, what's going through his head, what's his mission, who's he with, who's he fighting, what's a world spirit, what's the jungle look like? Details! Also, the spelling and grammar at points was bad enough to make me cringe. But, you do have me invested, so I'll go along for the ride, for now at least.
TBPH, it took me around a minute before I saw the Eldar, I dunno how I missed it.
It was confusing to say the least.
Nice pic
Alright I may be a bit late to the party, but the Eldar finding Dashie first...
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and it is defiantly Rainbow dash under there
and a smile to rival Rainbows when she returned
“I know what caused it, it’s called being tired.
and what is the ,thing, you're wearing
there’s not time to loose
“Did pinkie just jump into a”
1. Definitely, forgot to capitalise.
2. Rainbow's.
3. Forgot your closing quotation mark.
4. Probably meant to put some air quotes on "Thing".
5. No, Lose.
6. Best use a dash(hah, pun) to end the sentence. Makes it more abrupt sounding.
Sad to say I don't know much about Warhammer 40k lore as I only recently bought Dawn of War in a sale to try it out. And that's all I know
Oh right, forgot to mention one inconsistency.
One week was glazed over because it was... Too weak Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Holy Throne, she actually made it into the 41st Millennium!
The pace of this story is a bit to fast for me to be honest, I just cant get into it.
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By the Emperor's throne!
6826772 that's nothing the fact that she actually survived is impressive
Eldar?
Heresy.
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As if your username isn’t any less?
Is this 40k or 30k?
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40K
Okay, this does look interesting but as others have mentioned, you need a proof reader or an editor as the number of mistakes I spot and inconsistencies has taken me out of the story completely.
I think she's going to be a bit more wary of Pink and, if he is reformed, Discord now that she's encountered Chaos.
Especially Discord.
Why does everybody hate the Eldar? I for one actually really like them. Not as much as the Tau, but still.
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They’re annoying, stuck up and the reason the galaxy is in it’s current state because they created slanesh in a murder orgy
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Fuck the space elves and the space commies. For the emperor.
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Because the wh40k fandom is infected with racist xenophobes that can live out their genocidal tendencies and pretend they role-play.
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Bah, you humies don't know what youziz missin' out on.