Well, there we have it. Swooping Pegasus is finally over.
As far as first stories go, this turned out a lot better than I ever could have hoped. Thank you so much for all my readers who stuck with this for so long, there are far too many of you to thank individually, but I would like to thank some people especially for their multiple comments. So, in no particular order, thank you to:
Bazing
-Fleet Admiral Dash-
LtCWest
Rainbow87dash
FleetlordAvatar
Shadow Scryer
Brother Malachai
revan1801
AccessDeniedLULZ
Seriously, you guys are awesome, giving me ideas, telling me my spelling and grammer sucks, and just generally giving me loads of positive feedback.
Anyway, just because this is the end of the story, doesn’t mean this is the last you will see of the Swooping Pegasus. There are darker times ahead, so stay tuned for:
Descent into Madness.
Awesome read, man. Now that this is finished. I can't leave it without giving it a favorite. Now if only I could like it again.
I seriously enjoyed reading this, and was always looking forward to updates. Keep on keeping on, man.
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Oh, the author has some surprises up his sleeve! Can't say much more than that though-hush hush! Stay Tuned!
230 th like, but this story deserves at least 10X more
Hmmm the tau?
I wonder what pony you will use for that story
God dammit! Why can you only hit like once! XD
In any case this was a great ride while it lasted and I await impatiently for next master piece! :)
An amazing story. Nothing short of work of art! I will be patiently waiting for your next work
You got it from here: http://davionx.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Tau-410293275
Personally, I like this one better:
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4237489 I think the author said something earlier about using Applejack. I might be mistaken though.
I look forward to it , thanks for a brilliant story!
TAU TAU TAU TAU TAU TAU TAU TAU!!!!!!
OMFG TAU!!!!
Also, great story, loved it so much I will read again xD
You're very welcome for all the comments man :) well deserved
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Thought you guys would be interested in these
I have been keeping up with this story since the beginning and I'm so happy that you'll write another one cause this work here was amazing and i love it huge war-hammer fan and mlp fan so this was awesome.
Loved it soooo much!! I stayed with this story the whole way through and couldn't be happier with that choice! Thank you for writing this amazing piece of literature FenrisianBrony! Can't wait for the sequel!
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Holy..
That necron pony is awesome!
(Although I don't think I can really pull off a story with that in it, sadly.)
Oh, and thanks for the link.
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Well remembered partner.
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So... this straight, you don't want to see Tau in the story?
JK, hope you enjoy it.
Hmmm.....the Tau, you say. That doesn't surprise me at all. Though that does leave me with a lot of questions, most of them revolving around what will happen to RD now. Her creating that rune when she first became an aspect warrior points towards her becoming an exarch and starting her own shrine, but her war mask is fractured and destroying her mind, so she can't. Unless somepony else randomly gets ripped off Equis, they're gonna need more than the Royal Guard to deal with the Tau.
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I hope not....it would be kind of a waste to give AJ to the Tau. She's arguably the strongest, most durable of the show's main cast, and the Tau are worthless in a fist fight. About the only thing they could do with her to make use of her natural talents is to turn her into a mobile artillery platform. Unless, of course, she was just kinda like, "fuck your guns 'n shit! I'm trainin' with the Kroot."
Which would be awesome, by the way.
I Can't wait for the sequel!
...there is a sequel right?
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What do you mean? As in in this context?
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And possibly even a threequel.
But yes, the sequel is currently in production. All planned out, just need to write the SOB.
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You say that, but besides her strength, AJ is also very level headed under pressure, that makes for a good soldier. Plus as you say, she can carry nice heavy weapons.
4239151 yay
wonderful ending to a wonderful story! Can't wait to see some WEABOO FIGHTANAN ACTION IN SPAAAAAAAAAACE in the sequel
It certainly was a nice read through and through.
You managed to elevate my opinion on the Eldar, especially the craftworld of Saim-Hann (althou I just read that they are considered barbarians among other craftworlds).
You also captured our favorite Space Marines pretty well. The Blood Ravens are kick ass!!!
One a unimportant note.
I got tagged!
My input helped shaping a story!!
Thanks mate, I hope to see you again in the sequel.
Get the 'Nids in there, FOR THE SWARM!
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Oh I have no doubt that she'd make a fantastic soldier, I just have a hard time seeing her going with the Tau of all people. I dunno, maybe the idea of AJ as a mobile weapons platform will grow on me as the story progresses.
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I have some plans for it. I personally think it will work, but then again, that may just be my insanity talking again.
I absolutely love this story, and thanks for the honorable mentions. I will probably re-post this to Bronyland, now that it is a finished project. Your Welcome! Brony On My Friend! Now I have to go deal with these legal issues that Hasbro is now presenting. ThePonyArchive was shut down by Hasbro and many MLP sites are under attack by Hasbro's lawyers... uuhhhg
Psst, the link is now borked like mad. DA has it gone forever.
And so the story ends... But the adventure has only just...begun...
That was a surprisingly fun read. I tend to avoid crossovers but this one was cool.
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Glad you enjoyed it, if I ever get over my bloody writers block the sequel may be finished soon ish as well
Welp, one down. Now I gotta dive into the sequel.
I've read this thing so many times and it's still able to keep me engaged from start to finish, such a good story it is.
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I'm glad you like it :D
What do you think of the sequel?
I initially dropped this story for how rough those early chapters were, but I came back and am glad for it. It's definitely one of the better 40k crossovers!