Spike is finally old enough to realize his dream of attracting Rarity's eye, but with no experience under his belt, he turns to his lifelong friend Twilight to show him the ropes.
Oh my a complication in the mix!? Lots of ways this story could head now, I daresay I'm very much looking forward to any and all of them. Please no permanent damage to Twi!
Perfect! Now let's make it even more complicated by bringing in the apple mare, apple fritter, I think, and maybe we could throw in a dragoness, just for fun.
I love how in the past two chapters it was people moaning about it been a Spike and Twilight thing not a Spike and Rarity, and now they moan about it been a Spike and Rarity not a Spike and Twilight. You just can't please them.
Atleast Rarity returns Spikes feelings. Story really needs to end with Sprity though I guess a better ending would be Spike getting both Rarity and Twilight if Twilight feels the same way.
But seriously, you don't have to worry about this chapter not being interesting, if anything i'm a bit worried that the shit will hit the fan so hard the building will not only have to be evacuated but cleansed with fire and brimstone.
Give me a minute to think.... Okay I can say this with absolute certainty, excellent!! Thinking retrospectively the implications this carries for both future and past relationships is staggering. Through the whole update my mind reeled, TWilight is extensively damaged, Spike realized what he was doing with Twilight, and has kissed Rarity. Damn... He's bucked!!
2002224 Haha! My point of view is that, if I write it well enough, the way I present the relationship will win over whatever someone's "personal favorite pairing" is. As if that can even be a thing! The way one person writes Sparity could be so wholly different from the way another person writes it!
I just like a good story. So, I'm just going to write to please myself!
2002268 It was all just practice with Twilight, right? No emotional baggage whatsoever! She'll be fine with him following his dream girl! Right? ...Right?
2002269 Huge fan of Fallout: Equestria and it's side stories myself. I'm fully updated on Project Horizons! Check out Murky Number Seven if you haven't heard of it before.
2002322 I heart this story with all my heart. So even if the people keep arguing about Spike, Twilight and Rarity I approve of this story and love it. So keep writing to please yourself, for it please me.
... Rarity, you are one sick, sick pony. Putting the moves on a dude who mere moments ago was blaming himself for nearly killing his beat friend. There really needs to be a sad tag on here. Because dang this has nowhere to go but downhill. (Heheh I made a pun)
2002337 Thank you, that means a lot to me. It's a very good feeling to know that people appreciate what you do!
2002347 Oh, don't be so hasty. Besides, as Rarity understands it she's not treading on any sensitive ground. She has no idea the extent of their 'practice', and after Spike has been interested in her for so long, it's almost sort of unthinkable that he would ever begin to think otherwise.
However, the fact that I need to explain such things in the comments speaks only to my inability to properly portray Rarity's inward thoughts about it. Eh. There's a reason I haven't done anything from Rarity's point-of-view yet, though.
2002449 I can already tell you that I am having trouble with where I want to begin. I had a very good idea around 3:00 am, though, so I'll give that one a shot. All in all, I think that chapter 4 will be much more fun for me to write personally.
2002461 Excellent the story is always great when an author is enthusiastic about their writting! Hopefully it comes out soon, I want to see the drama Spike gets into!! Humm are you going to do a part with Rarity's point of view?
2002475 Next chapter? I plan on it, yes. I will probably have to spend an incredible amount of time getting her inward characterization just right, but I have a purpose and I believe it is a good way to solve it.
2002482 Humm? I thought you got her character down pat? Her reasons for waiting, not telling Spike how she feels, even the conversation with Sweetie bell; was it this fic?; seem very believable tome. If you have to do her point of view I think you have her characterization just right.
2002763 Yeah, I had trouble with this one, so I ended up keeping everything a lot shorter than I would have otherwise. Sorry for that, but I thought extending it would bring me into territory of "I really am writing another chapter" if I was to write more content, and expanding it needlessly would have simply contributed to it feeling dry.
A broken leg?! Twilight went all Terminator! But seriously, wow, this was a really good chapter. Glad to finally see some Sparity moments, but I do wonder, once her body has healed itself up to a certain point, couldn't Twilight just magically mend her broken bones? Just a thought.
That is...some love triangle in development!
Good job on this!
Keep up the good work.
Very nice, I just hope Twilight doesn't get upset.
Rarity.
What r u doin?
Rarity.
STAHP!
I want Twilight and Spike to be together
Commence read.
Now Rarity has made her move.
No!!! Don't do this now Rarity!!
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Oh my a complication in the mix!? Lots of ways this story could head now, I daresay I'm very much looking forward to any and all of them.
Please no permanent damage to Twi!
RARITY!!
YOR TIMING IS TERRIBLE!!
Perfect! Now let's make it even more complicated by bringing in the apple mare, apple fritter, I think, and maybe we could throw in a dragoness, just for fun.
piss off Rarity! i want TwiSpike
Ooohhh boy, this is gonna be good! Let the love triangle begin! I'm hoping for a Twi/Spike, but anything goes!
finally :D
poor Twi, though...
I love how in the past two chapters it was people moaning about it been a Spike and Twilight thing not a Spike and Rarity, and now they moan about it been a Spike and Rarity not a Spike and Twilight. You just can't please them.
Atleast Rarity returns Spikes feelings. Story really needs to end with Sprity though I guess a better ending would be Spike getting both Rarity and Twilight if Twilight feels the same way.
This love triangle can be only be solved one way.
Muuuud-FIIIIIGHT!
But seriously, you don't have to worry about this chapter not being interesting, if anything i'm a bit worried that the shit will hit the fan so hard the building will not only have to be evacuated but cleansed with fire and brimstone.
Give me a minute to think....
Okay I can say this with absolute certainty, excellent!! Thinking retrospectively the implications this carries for both future and past relationships is staggering. Through the whole update my mind reeled, TWilight is extensively damaged, Spike realized what he was doing with Twilight, and has kissed Rarity. Damn... He's bucked!!
Well, I am going to drown the sorrows and feels of this chapter by reading Project Horizons.....
Possibly chapter 35, if anyone knows what that means.
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Haha! My point of view is that, if I write it well enough, the way I present the relationship will win over whatever someone's "personal favorite pairing" is. As if that can even be a thing! The way one person writes Sparity could be so wholly different from the way another person writes it!
I just like a good story. So, I'm just going to write to please myself!
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It was all just practice with Twilight, right?
No emotional baggage whatsoever! She'll be fine with him following his dream girl!
Right?
...Right?
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Huge fan of Fallout: Equestria and it's side stories myself. I'm fully updated on Project Horizons! Check out Murky Number Seven if you haven't heard of it before.
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I heart this story with all my heart. So even if the people keep arguing about Spike, Twilight and Rarity I approve of this story and love it. So keep writing to please yourself, for it please me.
... Rarity, you are one sick, sick pony. Putting the moves on a dude who mere moments ago was blaming himself for nearly killing his beat friend. There really needs to be a sad tag on here. Because dang this has nowhere to go but downhill. (Heheh I made a pun)
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. It's a very good feeling to know that people appreciate what you do!
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Oh, don't be so hasty. Besides, as Rarity understands it she's not treading on any sensitive ground. She has no idea the extent of their 'practice', and after Spike has been interested in her for so long, it's almost sort of unthinkable that he would ever begin to think otherwise.
However, the fact that I need to explain such things in the comments speaks only to my inability to properly portray Rarity's inward thoughts about it. Eh. There's a reason I haven't done anything from Rarity's point-of-view yet, though.
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... I don't believe that.
Why can't he settle for having two marefriends?
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True love.
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Good answer. Thought you were going that way. Now what will happen to the mare he doesn't chose?
And Twilight is your new marefriend? NO! Twilight backs to friend-zone! KKKKKK!
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Heartbreak, probably.
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Of course!! I didn't know that!
Heheheh, will the next chapter be interesting? For you I mean.
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I can already tell you that I am having trouble with where I want to begin. I had a very good idea around 3:00 am, though, so I'll give that one a shot. All in all, I think that chapter 4 will be much more fun for me to write personally.
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Excellent the story is always great when an author is enthusiastic about their writting! Hopefully it comes out soon, I want to see the drama Spike gets into!!
Humm are you going to do a part with Rarity's point of view?
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Next chapter? I plan on it, yes. I will probably have to spend an incredible amount of time getting her inward characterization just right, but I have a purpose and I believe it is a good way to solve it.
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Humm?
I thought you got her character down pat? Her reasons for waiting, not telling Spike how she feels, even the conversation with Sweetie bell; was it this fic?; seem very believable tome. If you have to do her point of view I think you have her characterization just right.
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Never had a conversation with Sweetie Belle.
Never really went into why she waited to tell him.
So, no, not this fic. Haha.
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Weird not like me to confuse fics? sorry!!
no.... no... no,no NO NONONONON ON ON@ON!O N!O Npanposnfpi snN ONONNO NO
whyyyy spike, WHYYYYY, why still choose RARITY, (not that I hate her or dislike her) its just that Twi and Spike have been through so much already
;_;
i hope this fic would end with a harem end with Twi Spike and Rarity (even though the chance of this happening is way below 0)
author, y u play with mah feels
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It's okay :P I am not wounded in any way haha.
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you know what... just.....*creys in a corner*
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only you, author man, have made me wanna cry, rage and just...lasbflbjsab because of a fan fiction chapter, only you
you get all my internets for this.
-and damn i have to wait for the next chapter, until then, my jimmies will remain rustled
Finaaaally! Spike and Rarity! It'd be pretty selfish of Twilight to ruin Spike's life long desire
Btw, does anyone remember how funny this fic was during the first chapter? What a flip from comedy to extreme drama, huh?
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Funny?
Hmm. I'll work on that. I was feeling particularly clever and on-the-ball when I wrote the first chapter, so it does just make sense.
Yay another chapter! Gonna read this after school.
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Good, Really good!! But short.
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Yeah, I had trouble with this one, so I ended up keeping everything a lot shorter than I would have otherwise. Sorry for that, but I thought extending it would bring me into territory of "I really am writing another chapter" if I was to write more content, and expanding it needlessly would have simply contributed to it feeling dry.
A broken leg?! Twilight went all Terminator! But seriously, wow, this was a really good chapter. Glad to finally see some Sparity moments, but I do wonder, once her body has healed itself up to a certain point, couldn't Twilight just magically mend her broken bones? Just a thought.
Spike and rarity must hook up I order it. So says me!