Edit: I think I may have a better idea of what this is now. I think the source is stupid (Gentlemanverse? Fucking really? That's an actual thing?). I still would love an explanation.
1971304 I, too, will be reading because of maslow. Its funny... no, its not funny... its actually... interesting (the odds) that I just so happened to have looked up his hierarchy earlier today. did you know they've added bits? like transcendence... i didn't know until today.
I don't know whether to laugh or facehoof. And I thought I was the one that Did Not Do the Research most of my life. Or maybe its a joke and I haven't gotten it yet.
EDIT: Actually, I decided on my response:
Hey Typewriterpony, going to read this later. Busy day and I'm still writing that FH chap.
Well, honestly, its 90% done. However, if I do update G4M proper, I won't have any new chapters to write after that. My mind has been on Feathered Heart for a bit.
Hey alright another Gentleman story! Loving the story so far, big part of why the original G4M's was so good for me was the amount of story put into it and you've really got a great start here. Here's hoping Matt isn't too neurotic about waking up with Raven instead of Becky. I'm definitely adding you and your story to my 'must stalk' list.
Lol, nice finish for the first chapter, the poor guy believe he was having sex with Becky, wakes up the next morning to find Raven instead. It shall be interesting to see what happens from here, chances are that alot of juicy drama will happen, and most likely will result in Matt avoiding Raven like the plague (assuming he's not comfortable with the cross-species relationship). I can't help but wonder it was plan as Raven would seem to have the hots for Matt (seeing the first meeting that is), and convenient it is for Raven to be confused as Rebecca with hairstyles.
Different use of characters where its not focused on a Gentleman-related character, but begs the question in what kind of relevance does it have with the Gentleman universe? Besides the setting that is.
Anyhow, good work man, I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your work. Keep it up man
1981247 Yeah, which is funny since jager doesn't really make you that drunk. Seems like there might have been a lot of stuff that went on between the Booster Bomb and ending up in his apartment, huh?
That's going to be pretty easy to do, but it'll be explained more in the next chap
convenient it is for Raven to be confused as Rebecca with hairstyles.
Well considering that Matt was quite plastered, Raven has a black mane while Becky is a brunette.
what kind of relevance does it have with the Gentleman universe?
Chapter 2 won't so much say straight out as it will hint how this story is related to Larharl's Gentlemanverse (actually in a couple of ways, besides the setting.)
I tried reading this when there was only a single chapter, and I found it rather confusing, considering the rapid-fire introductions to just-shy of a dozen OCs. After reading the last half of the chapter about three times to solidify the characters who are more meaningful to the story (the end of the chap.1 did make one rather clear), it was quite an enjoyable read.
I found a few punctuation errors, mostly missing commas in sentences, mentally putting them in becomes annoying after a while :D Today>,< a literal flotilla of navy ships patrol Taking my carry-on luggage bag into his mouth>,< he threw it onto his back A few examples.
Thumbs up so far, will continue reading to see if it has a spot among my favorites.
Okay... what the hell is this?
Edit: I think I may have a better idea of what this is now. I think the source is stupid (Gentlemanverse? Fucking really? That's an actual thing?). I still would love an explanation.
Reading because of Maslow.
Not bad, well done sir.
1971304 I, too, will be reading because of maslow. Its funny... no, its not funny... its actually... interesting (the odds) that I just so happened to have looked up his hierarchy earlier today. did you know they've added bits? like transcendence... i didn't know until today.
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Have they, now?
Do you mean the self-actualization bit? Because that was Maslow's idea, too.
1971586 Yeah, I figured as much now.
At least the author here is trying to make a legitimate story with this one. Yay?
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I don't know whether to laugh or facehoof. And I thought I was the one that Did Not Do the Research most of my life. Or maybe its a joke and I haven't gotten it yet.
EDIT: Actually, I decided on my response:
Hey Typewriterpony, going to read this later. Busy day and I'm still writing that FH chap.
1972006
Did ye hear that? We write stories about "glorified man-whores" you and I!
1972044
But...you do.
1972044
Personally, glorified is a bit of a stretch. Harry isn't exactly swimming it like that guy singing 'Just a Gigolo'.
Also... let's not expand this topic. This is Typewriterpony's story.
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Maybe, Edmund is a man whore (actually he gets paid so he's a man hooker) but he is also a decent man, who loves his marefriends.
Wow. His mind will definitely go back and forth on this, depending on how accepting he is of cross-species relationship.
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Well, honestly, its 90% done. However, if I do update G4M proper, I won't have any new chapters to write after that. My mind has been on Feathered Heart for a bit.
Hey alright another Gentleman story! Loving the story so far, big part of why the original G4M's was so good for me was the amount of story put into it and you've really got a great start here. Here's hoping Matt isn't too neurotic about waking up with Raven instead of Becky. I'm definitely adding you and your story to my 'must stalk' list.
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uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
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ahh gonna be that kind of plotline eh? No objections here, should make for a very very entertaining read.
1977556
Oh, sorry. Its only been one night... so... not a relationship. Yet.
But my basic question remains the same... how accepting is he that he just slept with a horse-like creature?
*giggles with excitement*
I like this angle.
Good start, would have liked the clop scene to be longer and more fleshed out but since the idea was him being blasted I can see why it wasnt
Lol, nice finish for the first chapter, the poor guy believe he was having sex with Becky, wakes up the next morning to find Raven instead. It shall be interesting to see what happens from here, chances are that alot of juicy drama will happen, and most likely will result in Matt avoiding Raven like the plague (assuming he's not comfortable with the cross-species relationship). I can't help but wonder it was plan as Raven would seem to have the hots for Matt (seeing the first meeting that is), and convenient it is for Raven to be confused as Rebecca with hairstyles.
Different use of characters where its not focused on a Gentleman-related character, but begs the question in what kind of relevance does it have with the Gentleman universe? Besides the setting that is.
Anyhow, good work man, I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your work. Keep it up man
~Best regards
1972588
After updating my other two stories.
1981247
Yeah, which is funny since jager doesn't really make you that drunk. Seems like there might have been a lot of stuff that went on between the Booster Bomb and ending up in his apartment, huh?
1982995
That's going to be pretty easy to do, but it'll be explained more in the next chap
Well considering that Matt was quite plastered, Raven has a black mane while Becky is a brunette.
Chapter 2 won't so much say straight out as it will hint how this story is related to Larharl's Gentlemanverse (actually in a couple of ways, besides the setting.)
1983568
With the two points you have said, I can imagine how Matt's morning will play out to something similar to this...
As for the last point well, I'm in no rush to find out, just that curious to see how it will connect overall
I tried reading this when there was only a single chapter, and I found it rather confusing, considering the rapid-fire introductions to just-shy of a dozen OCs. After reading the last half of the chapter about three times to solidify the characters who are more meaningful to the story (the end of the chap.1 did make one rather clear), it was quite an enjoyable read.
I found a few punctuation errors, mostly missing commas in sentences, mentally putting them in becomes annoying after a while :D
Today>,< a literal flotilla of navy ships patrol
Taking my carry-on luggage bag into his mouth>,< he threw it onto his back
A few examples.
Thumbs up so far, will continue reading to see if it has a spot among my favorites.
Well now, what do we have here hmm? Faved and tracking.
Got drunk fucked a pony don't care had sex
salutm a mamt! < translate hahahahahahahahahahaha great fic man.......oh.....
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