Hey chill out....You actually have ok writing. I don't really like second person storyies but this one's a good time burner. Plus it actually has some sort of story. Besides...Bloodstains probably pissed he can't outwrite you
>> Bloodstain Hey, if you want to be a bitch then that's okay. But if you want to be stupid and be a bitch out of your mind(literally) then you can buck off!
bitch thinking: OK Bitch talking, typing, acting: Buck off!
>> little dashie Remember what Applejack said: "oh c'mon, that's just stinkin' thinkin'"
I was an hour early this morn so i am and hour early today....
Here is the scheldule for the rest of the story!
Central time
Ch 7-3am 1/16
Ch8-5pm 1/16
Ch9-5pm 1/17
Ch10-5pm 1/18
Epilouge-9pm 1/18
Sequel? TBA
Glad to hear the chapters are meant to be fewer and farther between. Now I don't have to go throught nearly as much torture by reading this shit.
As for the sequel, god forbid. If I wanted to read shit, I'd ask Kiernan to file another report.
And I'm going to be nice here. I know your editor. Make him edit the final two on Tuesday. No excuses!
133115 I've kind of had it with your shit.... but i have gone over the material and he will look at it...
as for you either read and enjoy or GTFO.... Tho fluttershy says to love and tolerate.... This is your ONLY post allowed to stay
4.3 rate thanks for the support guys!!!!
Hey chill out....You actually have ok writing. I don't really like second person storyies but this one's a good time burner. Plus it actually has some sort of story. Besides...Bloodstains probably pissed he can't outwrite you
133115 Piss off do your own story THEN judge others it's pathetic that you get kicks by picking on really good stories.
Oc vs Rainbow Dash? pfft it was obvious.
133275 hehehehehe curveball next chapter!!!! tell me it was obvious and i'll grill your flanks and serve them to the diamond dogs
unrelated note: new tag to the story.... not to happy about it but my brain farted and i had a chapter on my hands....
>> Bloodstain Hey, if you want to be a bitch then that's okay. But if you want to be stupid and be a bitch out of your mind(literally) then you can buck off!
bitch thinking: OK
Bitch talking, typing, acting: Buck off!
>> little dashie Remember what Applejack said: "oh c'mon, that's just stinkin' thinkin'"
133466 enough guys as much as i enjoy watching u burn his ass i don't want a war in my comments please tone it down
great story!!! as for the side story with applejack and ditzy i probably wouldn't read
133471 okay, I'll tone it down from now on.
"You watch as she trys her best mouthing diffrent words but nothing intelligable has come out of it yet"
Oh my.... Within the first sentence too...
My inner grammar-nazi is screaming in pain!
But the story is of such a high quality I couldn't help but give it a full 5/5 anyway...
JUST PLEASE FIX THAT!