This is my first fan fic so don't go to easy on it... constructive criticism helps writers become better.... And tell me if you would like a push on chapter 2 it is ready for you guys!
but i will try to get chapters out every day or when i have spare time...
127927 Okay why you have adorable picture and name!? That constructive criticism enough for you?. . . No? Oh... Hmmm. . . perhaps it need more Dash of a Rainbow (hint hint).
Jk But is seems nice, and interesting in a good way.
wha?
This is my first fan fic so don't go to easy on it... constructive criticism helps writers become better.... And tell me if you would like a push on chapter 2 it is ready for you guys!
but i will try to get chapters out every day or when i have spare time...
127927 Okay why you have adorable picture and name!? That constructive criticism enough for you?. . . No? Oh... Hmmm. . . perhaps it need more Dash of a Rainbow (hint hint).
Jk But is seems nice, and interesting in a good way.
127954 thanks rainbow will show up later in the story but its still rumbling in my head on what to do with her
i will post chapter 2 in a couple of hours
127927 This is your first fic. . . ? Bullshit.
I'm not into OOC but five stars.
It had potential, but there were too many spelling errors for me to enjoy it.