I tell you what everpony.... Ill push chapter 5 to a few hours from now, if i get 5 suggestions on what you want or think should happen Best one gets featured later on!
I love the story so far! Keep up the good work! My only recommendation would be to watch out for typos. Although they don't affect the story, there are quite a few.
Here it is guys chapter 4! right on time!
Chapter five will be posted early morn again and six in 24 hours!
130943 eeyup
I tell you what everpony.... Ill push chapter 5 to a few hours from now, if i get 5 suggestions on what you want or think should happen Best one gets featured later on!
eww... Sex... *pretends to put finger up mouth but ends up sick by accident* WHY MUST I HATE THE JUICY BITS?!
130971 i gave you a 'you don't have to read' statement.... also it was outline!!!!
131671 when i said constructive critism i didn't mean for fucking trolls....
on a lighter note chapter 5 in T minus 3 hours
this is pretty awesome! i like the sexy part
I love the story so far! Keep up the good work! My only recommendation would be to watch out for typos. Although they don't affect the story, there are quite a few.
This was some of the nicest clop I've read. Most of the stuff tend to be way to over the top than it should be, this, however, is done tastefully.