Seriously, good stuff. But I think you need to get a good proof reader to fix up the typo's. As is I rate it 4.5, but if you can fix up the typo's it gets 5/5.
Okay, now I'm starting to see this being your first fic. Quite a few simple typos, and minor Grammar mistakes. I'd suggest re-reading your story and fixing the mistakes.
i know i said i was gonna post this an hour from now but im am tired as fuck.... SO you are all lucky!
love you all (no homo0
bro hooves! ^-^/]
"Please leave your reaction to the ending!" ts3.mm.bing.net/images/thumbnail.aspx?q=1544632080690&id=047db1254a49114952c370799dbd96c1 jk! I'll keep my reaction to the ending.
132778 Fuck you write your own story before you slag other peoples off.
132806 love you bro!!!!!
epicly awsome brohoof
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That came out terrible.... I DONT CARE THOUGH!!!
awesome! chapter!
Epicly epic.
Seriously, good stuff. But I think you need to get a good proof reader to fix up the typo's. As is I rate it 4.5, but if you can fix up the typo's it gets 5/5.
Okay, now I'm starting to see this being your first fic. Quite a few simple typos, and minor Grammar mistakes. I'd suggest re-reading your story and fixing the mistakes.
Someponys craaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazy.