Despite the above though great chapter looking forward to more.And yheah I may just positive criticsim but that's because I think it's a great story and I'm not somebody who gets bothered by grammer(I'd read Harry Potter even if every third word was spelt wrong)
140864 I'm not with him she dies.Now don't get me wrong I'm not heartless I just hate these "impossible recovries" but it won't put me off the story either way.
Two chapters will be posted tomorrow... One will be the winner... I want you to read both and vote AFTER you have read both and decided which best suits you... You have the power to control your destiny! Choose wisely...
I say she dies. I want to see what the traumatizing event will do to him. It would make a perfect entrance for an OC pony to help him refocus the view on life again.
The authors note was heartwarming also id like to know what oc are in this if there in this chapter id like yoo to no that i posted this comment before i read it but not before authors note which was beautiful(NOT HOMO)
Hah FIRST!!
real comment posted later!
live and let live I used to say
not anymore though
live and let die.
interpret that anyway you want.
140847 I'm getting pissed off by seeing this on every chapter of every story I read.
SHE LIVES! I demand that she lives. "I" did not just go through all of this shit just to have her die on me. on a side note, good chapter.
Despite the above though great chapter looking forward to more.And yheah I may just positive criticsim but that's because I think it's a great story and I'm not somebody who gets bothered by grammer(I'd read Harry Potter even if every third word was spelt wrong)
140864 I'm not with him she dies.Now don't get me wrong I'm not heartless I just hate these "impossible recovries" but it won't put me off the story either way.
140862
Hey well you know what....DEAL WITH IT CAUSE IM GONNA KEEP DOING IT AHAHHAAHAHAHA......SWAG.
Oh and also she should live....We don't want anymore sadness...now do we guys?
140878 No, no we do not Dark.
141055>>140878 I do.
Calm down they will both happen but i want you to decide what direction the sequel will go...
keep bickering though because it amuses me... also you don't have to vote until after i post them... bickering away though i love and eat it up!
let her die and let him go revenage on his farther
Live, because shit is kinda depressing as it is. Happiness works.
Two chapters will be posted tomorrow... One will be the winner... I want you to read both and vote AFTER you have read both and decided which best suits you... You have the power to control your destiny! Choose wisely...
I say she lives cause because... Well shit I can't think of a reason now but yeah. O h wait, Twilight's magic. That's why I vote yes
I say she dies. I want to see what the traumatizing event will do to him. It would make a perfect entrance for an OC pony to help him refocus the view on life again.
i still say dat ponys crazy!
I know I'm late to say much of anything on this but, time for an Indy refference: "Choose, but choose wisely."
The authors note was heartwarming also id like to know what oc are in this if there in this chapter id like yoo to no that i posted this comment before i read it but not before authors note which was beautiful(NOT HOMO)