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I realized just now that I never gave this a thumbs up. That is a crime! I just corrected that mistake.
Haven't read this in a long time, I stopped. Though I loved this, not sure if I'll pick up fanfiction reading again on a regular basis, but I will definitely be downloading this masterpiece on the regular.
I always wondered what was going to happen with Carrot Top/Golden Harvest, given that we knew she was in a relationship with Lily. I look forward to the next hopefully Fluttershy centred chapter.
On a side note, it just dawned on me that this has now become something of a R63 version of Belle de Jour's blog. Any inspiration from that real life story?
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Can't say I've heard of it.
The chapter was very sweet for Derpy and Guilty. They're becoming more emotionally intimate with each other and that's cute as hell. Still, I worry about will happen between Carrot Top and Guilty. It won't be pretty.
5147678 Belle de Jour was the pseudonym of a high class London prostitute, who wrote a blog about her work. Eventually, following the success of her published book she revealed herself to be Dr Brooke Magnanti PhD. The old blog no longer exists but the book was made into a TV series entitled 'Secret Diary of a Call Girl' which I believe is currently on Showtime in the US. It's also on YouTube.
Like Guilty, she tells the audience about her life, including sessions, as she attempts to maintain a normal life as her friends are unaware of her profession. Take a look if you have a chance, might prove some good source material.
As always, MM, same top-notch quality on this chapter as all of the others. You really know how to paint a character's emotion in such a way that it projects itself in full detail onto you and into your psyche.
Love you, and love your work. Keep it up, man
Dammit, Guilty. It's like seeing a train approach an intersection, and seeing some idiot at the red light revving his engine. Part of you wants to scream at the idiot to be smart... but part of you is silently wishing he goes for it, just to see the epic crash.
Holy shit, new chapter! YAY!
-reads-
All I can think of regarding Carrot Top's next session is that I'm gonna need some popcorn. Eagerly looking forward to it!
My opinion on the story:
Ok, I apparently didn't favorite this story. I thought I did and was wondering when the next update was.
Only now do I see that I am actually quite behind on the story.
Time to catch up.
I'm wondering if Lily is going to sneakily follow Golden, and finds out what's happening. If that suits happen,i hope things work out!
I wonder if anyone's going to have the common sense to realise that Guilty isn't to blame, Golden is. No one told her to run to the town's rent boy to hide from her relationship problems.
And Applejack now has the vindication she needs to start a campaign to kick Guilty out of town. Also, is the Twilight side-story completely resolved now? The boyfriend knows about her session with Guilty, maybe he too will blame the end of the relationship on him (not the fact that he is an asshat).
One small critique:
Certain phrases and stuff keep popping up, that conversation between him and Derpy, major sense of Deja Vu right there, almost a carbon copy of the conversation regarding Dinky's fight at school (minus conversational coitus ofc). Nice to learn that Dinky seems to like Guilty.
On the plus side, Fluttershy foreshadowing and more adorable Derpy/Guilty moments.
Let's not take too long next time author
That being said I'm a Chemistry student at University, I know schedules can be hectic and I can sympathise, especially knowing how hard Physics is. Take what time you need, just don't forget about this.
Fantastic! Derpy and Guilty are just so cute together!
Amazing yet again. Yours is still my first and favorite story from Fimfiction. Please keep this story going forever and ever.
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Boy, getting run out of town and having to beg for his old job back would be a real kick in the gut.
there is one line i think should be changed because we are talking about ponies not people ...But, when Derpy kisses me… I… I feel it again. I feel like I did when I was barely a man ( should be stallion or colt in his case) , getting laid for the first time.
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Good catch. Thank you.
Congrats you wrote a clop story I like! Still a No Sex version would be nice...
Magus, this update made my day, it's good to see you (and your story) again! Derpy and Crook's dialog is so cute, and I'm willing to bet it wasn't easy to write. Cutesy relationship stuff rarely is.
5150549 It's a story about an escort, good luck with a no-sex version of it.
Oh dear, poor Guilty still feeling, and Derpy is finding out just how far he has to go in his normal job. Hope things keep going between them. Next up, Carrot Attack?
New chapter. Sweet. I'm going to wait till i finish the fic i'm on , then i'm going to re-read the whole thing.
Update!? UPDATE!
Awesome!
Smart pony. Don't trust any food with 'loaf' in it's name.
Really? you'd think something like that would have come up by now. Then again, all her session were fairly early in the morning, so yeah, likely never had a reason to talk about it. But... why?
Oh just doesn't want to oversleep or deal with a hangover in the morning. Though one or glasses of cheap wine shouldn't do much. Still, rather cute she's so worried about saying thew wring thing here. Given what a nervous wreck Guilty is. They are just so damn cute together.
Hey it's best that way.
Huh. Yeah I'm that way with a lot of food too. It's not so much the taste as the texture.
Oh come on, you knew this was going to come up at some point.
Eventually you'll have to deal with her BS and either get her to back down, or push her to the point everypony realizes what a bitch she is.
Oh shit. Well, this is going to be very, very awkward.....
noticing a lot of end points that all come out to a dead Guilty. maybe you'll luck out and the real AJ will come back to reveal the imposter that's been pretending to be her. And to be fair, don't think you've had Carrot Top as a client since you found out about her relationship.
Yup totally nailed that bluff check....
Wow was not expecting that kind of heavy decision to hit him like that. But yeah he was screwed either way. And not the good kind. But, damn, no good way to handle that yet, great way of writing it though.
Well, yeah you are rather in trouble, then again the only two ponies that know are you and Carrot Top, and not like she'd ever admit to it. And Derpy does know you can't talk about clients, so she might understand. Still be mad but, understand too so, there's hope.
How!? That is the best part!
Again he is just so damn adorable at how badly he handles this stuff.
Well, that was rather direct.
Hell yeah! Perfect way to put it.
Watch it be 7:30 AM... Though, pretty sur he has windows in the room so, would be able to see sunlight... though it IS winter...
Yup, and just how damn well the story explores, shows, and just in general handles this is one of the best things about it.
Well.... this is going to be very, VERY awkward...
So yeah, another great little chapter. Guilty and Derpy are so cute togethe, and the whole thing about sex and her asking him and the whole talk about it.. just, so damn touching. You can tell how much they care for each other. Just, yup again, all around great story, and hopefully next one will be along soon.
Guilty... for once... don't live up to your name.
Get Goldy to figure out what's wrong. If nothing else, make her talk.
Or you're gonna ruin the best parts of your life.
Does anyone else see Lily hiring Guilty out of spite the moment she finds out?
Guilty: "I'm so sorry, I was just doing my job. I'm a professional, and as horrible as that may seem, sometimes-"
Lily: "How much?"
Guilty "-that means you have to do things that, I'm sorry, what did you just ask me?"
Lily: "Your services. How much?"
Guilty: "But-"
Lily: "So, you'll sleep with my girlfriend knowing she's with me, but if I ask it's morally unacceptable?"
Guilty: "No ma'am. Sorry ma'am. There are just much cheaper ways to get back at your marefriend, ma'am. I'm a bit expensive-"
Lily: "Then for Golden's sake, and mine, I really hope you're worth it."
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Aww, thank you.
5152737 I love reading what you post
5176361 Thanks.
Though thinking about it more. Guilty could actually take credit for being what's keeping Lily and Carrot Top together for as long as they have in the first place. Carrot Top coming to him was entirely her own decision, and she hates him for it, but it's her own choice. She isn't happy with he relationship with Lily, and that has nothing to do with Guilty. She loves lily, but just isn't satisfied with a mare and needs a stallion now and then. Guilty let her release those urges in likely the safest and least destructive way. Rather then picking up some random colt in a bar or other acts that would have gotten out of hoof.
Seing Guilty let her deal with those urges and allowed her to stay with Lily far longer then she likely would without him. He is not the issue at all, but rather Carrot Top's own issues are at fault. She is the one that can't go without a dick in her for more then a few weeks. Who isn't satisfied with Lily alone as a lover. All guilty is doing is providing a service that he provides to any mare that wishes it. No questions asked.
Granted, how he acts now, the next time she shows up knowing all this. That is going to be a decision point for him. And while right now he is totally blameless in it, next time, might not be able to claim that.
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Thats what i thinking the disco was going for
But what if something elese happens she tell her it all need and its not love so she brings her next time
Love to see what happens so many thing can not wate
I hadn't even noticed another one of these came up. Once I did I immediately read it. This story is glorious, it almost makes me wanna try and write something. Good work man.
Awww snaps, Goldie is starting to come back and bite. I knew this was going to happen the moment they all were talking, I'm scared for how this is going to turn but I know you're going to take us for a wild ride. And I may shake my fist at you a few times but know that I do it with love. And I'm still waiting on that Fluttershy mister, I saw the hint!!!! I SAW IT!!!
I am so happy that this story isn't dead.
You are doing a great job. Keep it up!
Finally, I get to read this chapter. Excellent as usual, I'm really looking forward to Guilty's talk with Dinky. That midterm schedule had got to be horrible. Although I'm not sure if it's really worse when they all line up. Having 4 midterms in 1 week really sucks.
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Yup! I'm currently getting my masters.
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I'm in a two year program. First semester.
Oh. No more chapters.
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I always love seeing someone new discover my story.
Don't worry, though, this story isn't dead. There will be more chapters once i can find the time.
I have to let you know how relieved I am that this story isn't inactive. I never really paid attention to the fact that the story was incomplete until I was a few chapters in, and by then I wouldn't have been able to stop reading if you'd paid me.
I would have read it up to the final chapter anyway and ended where the author had left it hanging as so often happens. It would have left me feeling a little bitter.
I can't wait to see where this goes! I haven't been able to stop reading. I discovered the story 3 days ago and I'm already up to date so the new change of pace will take some getting used to.
Keep it up, I'm loving it!
5235263 Room 219 came out well after this was first published
On a (slightly) unrelated note, when's the next chapter of "One Way Road"?
That's nice.
This is such a sweet story.
Well, this was a great chapter. The date was sweet, the sex was emotionally driven, and his emotional awakening is great over these last few chapters. I m not sure how I missed this story. Bravo
It makes me quite happy to see this two love bird ♡
I really wish them the best happy ending
I guess cooks have the same problem? They have to serve first class food all the time but would love to have a cheap easy meal when in private.
Great chapter. Cute Derpy is heart melting
Boop the snoot