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Oh snap!
“Albright, then. How about you, Twi?-
Oops, I messed up again. Change that to Alright, please
Aaaaaaaaaand it's marked as mature... Sorry, but assuming that mark has a reason, I, as a 13 year old, can't read this. Sorry.
610668
Well, you had to have had mature checked in order to veiw this story...
610705 That's just because I wanted to comment here.
POST THE NEXT PART RIGHT NOW!!!!
610707
I'm going to have the Mature thing fixed tonight. I have a plan that allows readers of ALL AGES to enjoy this fanfic...
610736 How are you going to do that, you're not the author? Are you going to convince him? Also, I just noticed that having mature unchecked just doesn't allow me to see the story itself, I can still comment!
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I apolagize for the accusation. I have been Loaf's co-author and pre-reader since chapter 13, and as I said, I have a plan.
Oh man. This is getting tense! Awesome chapter.
DAYUM!
I know fluttershy can get mad but you broke the line on her kindness mon
but thanks to this I am no longer mad with that clop scene like before so... yeah!
cool stuff
Complain about having sex with Luna? That is stupid !
And Fluttershy goes in tears and forgives him after listening to the whole story...
Fluttershy is gonna feel so awful when she finds out Peter got stabbed, and she didn't even care to notice.
GODDAMNIT FUCKING RAPE RUINS EVERYTHING!
Please post the next chapter soon.
Chapter 16: The OOC Fluttershy Chapter.
Really.
That's all I have to say.
610668 The hell? Kid, there was no point in that comment. The very thing that made this Mature was the last chapter. And even then, you just made yourself look like a dumbass...
THIS IS AN OUTRAGE! I AM OUTRAGED BEYOND WORDS HOW COULD DIS HAPPEN?!??!
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Few things:
1) Fluttershy, you are the most adorable pony in the world, but today, you are a bitch. Why? Because Peter admitted to you that he was raped, and you respond not with comfort and shit, but with anger, rage, a slap to the face, and storming out of his life. Yeah. That's how you handle something like that. That makes the person feel SOOOOO much better about everything.
2) Peter, you are a very nice and cool dude, but today, you are a dumbass. Why? Because when a knife is stuck to the back of your neck, GIVE HIM YOUR DAMN WALLET. Seriously. Nothing is worth more than your insignificant life. But whatever, you did resist, and got stabbed... twice. Great. You could've partially redeemed yourself by, oh, I don't know, LETTING FLUTTERSHY KNOW! Seriously. I don't care how angry she is at you, she would've helped you out. Even if she wanted nothing to do to you, she would've made sure you didn't die.
That is all
mugged? out of all the possibilities of what could happen.. you were mugged and stabbed thrice. talk about unexpected endings.
i like it. post more twists like this please
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and also when my anticipation rises.
I need to know what happens next!
610746 Answer this, is the only reason you didn't like the clop scene because it wasn't Peter and Fluttershy doing it?
612409 rape kinda does ruin everything....
612409 Calm down, it's just a story.
621982 I know. I'm still allowed to rage.
622282 Can't argue with that logic.
622818 I thought about that when writing the chapter.
624639 Are you going to deny that there is bad people in this world that wouldn't care what they would do to something we like just for science or some other random reason?
622882hey Loaf when are you going to post the next chapter? just saying also the story is good so far. here you earned a few emotes hope you like them. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
626587 How and where did you get those emoticons?
629292 i aint telling but i WILL tell you this... ask iloveportalz... you may thank me now for adding the coolness of these emoticons to your roster once you get it. you need firefox for it though. and greesemonkey.
That was unexpected D:
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter...
i love this story. when are you going to put the next chapter up?
still no new chapter......time to read it again!
heres the link to the emotes :P get them if you want. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rarity_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applejack_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Queen_Chrysalis.png
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683896 Sweet! Thanks man!
684435 now PLEASE make more chapters... if you don't fluttershy might cry...
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this is beautiful