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Okay, I seriously need to get a check up for narcissism...
Every time I see a fic that uses the name of my main character or has a summary that comes anywhere near the basic idea of my plot, I immediately think 'rip off!' I seriously think I might be letting this stuff get to my head just a wee bit...
Sorry for letting the internet control me!
131614 I'm sure the internet controls us alot of the time and i understand how you feel, i felt the same alot of times i read other fanfic with the littlest thing similar to mine.
Pretty good, a pre-reader/editor might help out a bit but there isn't really anything too big, just a few instances where a comma might help and at one point (even like I do sometimes) you did a classic there/their/they're mix-up. I hope i didn't offend you or anything though.
In case you didn't see my comment in the last chapter...
Imma track it so hard, heat-seeking missiles would be jelly.
One major problem, Fluttershy tends to carnivores.
While on Equestria.
She would understand that some animals would need meat to survive, so wouldn't freak out.
Can't wait for next chapter
131926 She probably would if they are bunnies
131922 Not at all, you see i had the chapter done since Tuesday but i had alot of stuff to do for school plus i needed to study for like 3 exams and well i didn't have time to actually publish the chapter or have somebody pre-read it
Thanks for using my CNN idea :3
132854 No problem :) i really liked the idea, thanks again
Excellent
MY GOD YOU HAVE THE WORST POKER FACE EVER
I'm LOVING this story!It's awesome!
...She fed worms to baby birds.
She tamed a bloody manticore, she kicked the ass of a bear, has Angel as pet, who is actually the demon in disguise and Gryphons live in Equestria no problem.
Its good so far, but there are a few mistakes here and there. Like for instance: you used there instead of they're in one part. Just saying but so far good.
(I suggest having editors or somethings, maybe a dictionary might help.)