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NOOOO! You just made things worse for me! I want a compromise, not another cliffhanger!
Dude... You were supposed to change "Sample Text" into your Author's Note.
I feel something incoming......
.....ITS REDEMPTIOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN-AH!!!
you could of told us you were working on it... we did not know that is why we nagged.
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Even though I sent the last peice to him at 3am yesterday, Loaf didn't read the chapter before posting it. I just asked him, and he still has no idea that it's there.
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Chapters 16 and 17 were originally 1, so chapter 17 was already done by the time 16 was posted. I am more of a second author than a co-author, so I actually take about the same amount of time as Loaf with the story. The delay between 16 and 17 was waiting on me to edit.
What fuckery is this!? If this ends with Peter dying forever, I will be super pissed!
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HOHMYGAWD NEWCHAPTER!
....I DONT CARE, LUNA IS STILL BEST PONY!
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wait hold on hold on hold on!
you have 2 kidneys, you can live with just one.
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686047 Dont Dr.Who me
Am I the only one that thinks Celestia was OOC while yelling at Luna? I'm pretty sure Celestia wouldn't yell. She'd be stern, yes, but I don't think she would be one for yelling.
Then there's the fact that you only need one kidney to live.
If he dies for good, I will be pissed.
686592 I added a note on the chapter, just so you know why the thing about Pete's kidney
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or... you could have changed it to something like his liver or something...
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you humans and complicating everything
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i like how you replied to me three times...
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sorry couldnt help it
there was a storie call life with the pony i loved i was the same as this one. but got removed but this one is x10 better i like it
687546ahh shut up!
who cares!
ITS WHAT MAKES US HUMAN!!!!
if it means thing have to be complicated SO BE IT!
686792 Celestia's still OOC. I couldn't really enjoy this one, Celestia shouting at Luna just stuck out in a bad way to me.
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692005 could you please stop with the Dr.Who pics?
Proced To The Next Chapter
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Celestia lost her cool because she found out that her dear sister not only raped Peter (she knew they had sex, but nothing more), but that action caused him to be fatally wounded. So, Celestia had 3 options:
1. Burn the letter and do nothing.
2. Calmly explain the situation to Luna, who would react neutrally.
3. Shout the situation to Luna, who would get off her butt and do something about it.
692005I dont even like 10!
I DARE TO SAY THAT I LIKED 9 BETTER!
AND ELEVEN!!
692278 Simply put, Celestia can get through to people without yelling. She's one of those people that don't need to yell to get you to listen. But fuck it, I don't feel like arguing. Do what the hell you want, but I hope you at least make your views known later on, like a 'I didn't mean to shout, but you wouldn't do shit if I didn't' type deal.
687546......You know...about 200 years ago, I would wonder how you got that picture of me....these days, I don't even bother. I mean, before, there was logic....
Then I met Pinkie Pie...
ALLONS-Y!!!
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no its actually quite simple, while you were facepalming i snuck on board took a picture then left
if peter dies, I WILL MAKE CUPCAKES. however, i feel that is not the case. luna is probably gonna come and use some magic to revive peter or something.
He's dead?
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I swear to thee, upon the heads of the Mane 6, , if Peter dies, Fluttershy dies by offering him her liver, or Luna fails at whatever it is she's doing, I shall hunt thee down and make thee wish that thou hast never picked up a quill before.
(This is just me raging, this story is awesome and I just started today. Please continue.)
791655 I placed it back into the chapter, even though some people are going to rage. I don't like the idea of separating an important part of the story into a new one, that's just silly.
Are you making the next chapter?
Please tell me this story isn't dead, this one of the best storys I have ever read.
W-Why aren't you posting new chapters?
910251 I could upload the un-edited chapter and have some of you rage over grammar and have Extrapie rage at me or we can wait until he is finished and upload it then; I know it's been a month since the last update but a lot of stuff has been going on and i guess the same can be said for Extra and I'm sure you're all wanting to read the conclusion of all this but just give it some time. I haven't talked to Extrapie since my grandpa passed away and I don't know why but i think he may be busy with another fanfiction, also he does have his own fanfic that he might be working on so there is really no true date I can say for the next chapter to be published.
i am a patient waiter. i will wait 999 years if i must for new updates.
926664 Well i finished chapter 19 already so I'm just waiting for Extrapie to reply, hopefully chapter 18 is almost done with editing, no promises though
He's dead
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998629 This comment made my day
blarg so much waiting! maybe i should work on my fic.......nah i have too many things i am anxiously waiting for to work on something.
1000206 The story is finished and is just waiting to be edited and uploaded
He better not die
After chapter 15, it became rather difficult for me to read....not that it deducted the story of it's awesomeness....well maybe a bit , haha jk...it did actually give it much more emotional depth between the protagonist and Fluttershy. I was only slightly pulled off at first because of the sexual and emotional betrayal in the last chapter...I almost cried But this chapter makes up for it, of course it's sad that he dies(hopefully not for good)...but at least all was forgiven. Overall, this is a great story so far and hopefully it shall only get better!!
for some reason i see a future where Luna gets bitch slapped by fluttershy
I told myself I wasn't going to cry.
Update soon!
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1456553 I would update but then i would get a lot of comments complaining about the grammar and stuff.
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Get an editor then... I know a few who might help out