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I got hard not in any way a cock-block just hope humans and alicorn DNA isnt compatable

Achievement Get! Raped by a princess.

Really wanna see how he's goin to handle this. I'm guessin' he'll confess the moment it looks like Shy knows

I think this is the beginning of a rift in Peter's and Fluttershy's relationship (when she finds out)

...not sure if want

Why was there the sudden need to add clop to this? And we didn't need measurements of your dick.

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sorry....

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hehe

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o.0 only saw the first part not sure if want... to read.......(<==imagine as Luna) lol

Oh god.....Stupid penis...stop erecting whenever something sexy happens....But yep it was a good chapter...a lot of detail too.

okay now that i'm finished
now then HOW DARE YOU BETRAY FLUTTERSHY LIKE THAT YOU COULD OF EASILY RUN AWAY FROM HER(ran out of emotes so imagine sad fluttershy here)(also no I don't actually think that I just like being over dramatic sometimes...FUCK I'M TURNING INTO RARITY *goes into shower in featle posistion rocking back and forth*)

....<(0.0)>..........

529530
We added clop to increase the flow of the chapter, as well as to add some zest to the story. The original plan was not to include the sex scene, but I felt that the story was turning dull. Loaf made a blog post requesting your (the reader) opinion on the matter. After a couple days of "go-ahead"s, he gave me the OK to write the clop scene. As for Peter's member, it helps the reader paint a more accurate picture of a clop scene if he knows the size of the lovers' sexes.

I no longer like your story
sorry, its just...Ugh
why man?
Just why?

535477 Sorry but it's necessary for the next chapter(s), originally I didn't want to add it but anyway sorry, that's just how it had to be.

535477
I may be responsible for your sudden dislike of this story.
You see, under my co-authorship, Loaf`s writing style and plot ideas have not shone through as much as previously. It was I who suggested the clop chapter. It was I who changed the wording and grammar of the story. Please, don`t be mad at Loaf. Be mad at me.
Frankly, I thought that this story improved after I started pre-reading in chapter 13. I cleaned up most of the grammar, spiced up the vocabulary, and attempted to patch up the plot holes. I understand that you may disapprove the clop scene in this chapter, but I am surprised that you have begun to dislike the story despite my changes. I apologize for disrupting this fic.

542235fine then but i didnt mean
i woulnt read it anymore
i mean that the clop scene was completely unnecesary
and it just looks like it just there for the hell of it
I dont when people just do that

542869
The clop scene may have been unneccicary, but Luna raping Peter was not. It is imperitive to the future plot that such an act occurred. I do not think Luna as a rapist, so, I wanted the scenario to be more like "enjoyed forced sex." When I implemented that into the story, the flow of it was disrupted in my attempts to forlorn the clop scene. Therefore, in order to improve story flow and character interactions, I added a clop scene.
If you want me to stop pre-reading, then bring that up with Loaf.

*clop clop clop * oh yeah right comment

i got hard

*clop clop clop*

542930okay see, now that was a good explanation for the clop scene
now i actually understand why its there
okay so now i shall keep enjiying the rest of this
so than you for explaining

BLARG WAFFLES MY GOD SIR!........ this was tasty... very tasty

i like ur story but then dont really like it much anymore because of the raping which spoiled the story in my opinion..

557102 Just look at what Extrapie wrote, this had to happen for a reason. Even if it was to graphic it was still going to end up in the story.

I came across this story just a couple of days ago and I read it from the beginning. This is a great story, I hope you continue to keep up the excellent work.

oh god why must this exist?

if luna being a rapist was important to the story, DID YOU HAVE TO FUCKING WRITE IT? I know i could've skipped it, but FUCK. Fuckityfuckfuck.

i read the clop scene.man fluttershy is going to be real mad

559023 umm the link for the clop scene nolonger works

aaaaaaand it turns into a clop-fic. not that im complaining though, Luna is hot.

"is not rape if enjoyed" she right
sex is just sex

jeez

God damn it, Luna is so irresponsible as a princess; if that we're me I would say "No, i will not do this, I can sleep outside if this means I don't have to have sex with you"