It's been eons since the Doom Slayer had been in deep slumber. Now freed, he must readjust to the present while also having to deal with the anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply.
11815806 yeah i know that and it's still canon Will used it. it was a false name to keep from getting special treatment since Willam's family name would do that both his father and great-grandfather (BJ Sr used to be his grandfather until Youngblood changed that) did so much for the world and the US that it would color anything involving him in the military
A wave kicked by the manticore kicked Applebloom into Sweetie Belle’s immobile frame.
This one's less a misspelling or grammar error, but something I know I hate when I notice I do it. Consider replacing the second instance of 'kicked' for something like 'launched'?
Thanks for the update!
Interesting story. I shall keep it tracked.
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let the Intern somehow can still contact with Doom guy is a better option, because Vega-The Father is too OP, unless you strip all his power
banger chapter
That was really close for Sweetie Belle there.
Now I'm looking forward for more to come.
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yeah i know that and it's still canon Will used it. it was a false name to keep from getting special treatment since Willam's family name would do that both his father and great-grandfather (BJ Sr used to be his grandfather until Youngblood changed that) did so much for the world and the US that it would color anything involving him in the military
Not quite, I think.
This one's less a misspelling or grammar error, but something I know I hate when I notice I do it. Consider replacing the second instance of 'kicked' for something like 'launched'?