LOVE how is It going

So they are building some portal?
Looks like they are making the same mistake the humans had done which literally unleashed hell.

Thanks for the update!

Amidst the gentle sway of the trees, their

Looks like you are missing most of a paragraph. (Near the top of the chapter)

The branches creaked in harmony admits the gentle sway of the trees

*amidst

Dex and the monster gouged at each other.

I don't think that word means what you think it means. I assume you mean they stared at each other? Gouging is something completely different.

Gunfire erupted in the air. But it didn’t matter. Jophery found himself yanked away from Robert, his eyes meeting the creature’s own.

You've slipped back into original names from Jurassic Park here.

Now I've finished reading this chapter:

The Jurassic Park reference that took up most of the chapter was very unexpected for the Doom crossover story. I suppose I should assume that instead of a velociraptor in the cage it was one of the demons.

There's one extra person that Djunnark needs to worry about on top of the princesses, but he's currently just wandering around the Everfree forest at the moment and only a certain 3 people know about his existance.

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What’s taking place in this chapter is not happening in the Everfree forest but in a whole other location that is unknown to all three of the princesses, including Twilight. Said princesses, as well as Twilight, are also unaware of Djunnark’s existence but will learn soon in future chapters.

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I thought no one would notice but that’s my fault for not checking enough to see if there’s still some stuff to be edited. It also didn’t help that I was reading a bit of Jurassic park while writing this.

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It also doesn’t help that I’ve recently been reading an MLP x Jurassic Park fix on this site, so I’ve been especially primed for it.

There used to be a preview that showed how Granny Smith met Doomguy after Doom 64 but before Doom 2016, will Granny Smith already know the Doom Slayer here?