Cadance led Tempo along with a bright smile. "I told my friends all about you."
"Good things?" Tempo hastened to Cadance's side. "I only just learned things recently. We haven't even talked about them."
"About this brave pony." she bumped against Tempo gently. "--who rescued me, and did amazing magic."
Tempo felt heat rising. "Once... I couldn't do it again. I don't know how."
"And that's okay." Any problems there, Cadance didn't see. They emerged from the castle to a grassy clearing with other foals. They spotted Cadance and Tempo and waved in unison. "There's my friends now. Hello!"
A colt sat up. "Hey, Cadie. Tempo? Heard about you."
A nasally sounding filly nodded. "Nice to meet you. I heard you fought some bad ponies."
"And it was brave," noted a thinner colt. "Brave and amazing! I wish I coulda seen it!"
Tempo shifted awkwardly under the sudden attention from Cadance's curious friends, smiling hesitantly. "It, uh, wasn't really a fight," she murmured. "More like an accidental magical surge. I don't even know how it happened..."
She scuffed a hoof across the grass, memories of those confusing moments still a bewildering blur of desperation and protectiveness swirling inside her.
Cadance just grinned, giving Tempo an encouraging nudge. "You saved me from the bad ponies and that's what matters! However you made that awesome teleportation spell explode out."
The colt, Glyph, leaned in eagerly. "Would have loved to see something as awesome as that! Can you teach us the incantations? I've always wanted to teleport further than across the room."
He flicked his short tail, magic lighting his stubby horn as if ready to start practicing that instant. The snooty filly rolled her eyes but looked anticipatory too.
Tempo flushed, wings ruffling up under her cloak self-consciously. "I wish I could show you," she admitted, "but I was kinda just wildly making stuff up to escape at the time. No idea if I could do any of it again."
She dared meet Cadance's gaze, worried she'd be disappointed in her new sister's magical uncertainty. "Sorry to be such a letdown compared to the story..."
Cadance just slid closer and hugged Tempo. "It'll come back, I'm sure. You're still new." She squeezed Tempo tighter. "Love you... But, oh, did I show you the stick fort?"
She bounced away. "This way."
Tempo blinked rapidly, her sister's easy affection catching her off guard as it often still did. Then she hurried to follow the energetic filly, glad for any distraction from uncomfortable scrutiny, even if that meant...playing with sticks?
The stick fort proved to be little more than a lean-to constructed of long sticks leaning against the wall of the castle. Tempo touched one and it threatened to fall ovre. "Not very... secure."
Glyph huffed. "I told them that!"
Cadance pouted, arms crossing. "I didn't see you fixing it. Tempo, do you have ideas? You're full of great ideas."
Was she? Tempo turned her thoughts inwards, trying to find some kind of idea. Something good...
She wanted to protect Cadance. Cadance wanted a little fortress. Protect.
"Right." Tempo reached out and brushed the sticks, horn glowing as she almost soldered the sticks to the ground. She reared up and repeated it for their connections to the wall. They were no better looking, but they were far more secure. "How's that?"
Cadance's eyes widened. "Wow..."
"Woah," agreed Glyph. "You're a natural! Okay, no excuses! Show me how to do that one. You just did it. Please!"
Tempo blinked in surprise as the other foals gazed at her handiwork with impressed expressions.
"Oh, um, I was just reinforcing the structural integrity," she mumbled, scuffing a hoof self-consciously. Hardly an impressive feat compared to long-range teleportation.
But Glyph practically vibrated with excitement beside her. "You made it way sturdier with just a glow! Come on, you gotta show me how you shaped the magic so perfectly."
Cadance edged over to gently bump Tempo's shoulder. "See? You have lotsa special talents just waiting to come out, sister." Her grin widened. "Ooh, I know - you can help us make the fort bigger!"
She gestured across the clearing where a few small boulders dotted the grass. "We can use those rocks to build the walls up solid. But they're too heavy to move..." She blinked pleadingly at Tempo.
With the way both Cadance and Glyph gazed at her so hopefully, Tempo felt her reservations melt away. She was still figuring out so much about herself - perhaps she had underestimated her capabilities. And helping Cadance expand her little fort did sound gratifying...
"Okay, stand back everypony," Tempo announced, horn lighting up brighter. She focused on the nearest boulder, picking it up and floating it over to hover beside the fort. Though heavy, it felt almost natural manipulating its bulk psychically.
"Let me just fuse these into the walls..." She concentrated, melding the rocks seamlessly to the wooden frame. Soon a solid, fortified structure emerged from their efforts, just wide enough for the foals to fit inside.
Cadance's eyes shone. "It's perfect!" Before Tempo could react, the exuberant filly had tackled her in an ecstatic hug. "You're the best sister ever!"
Tempo flushed under the wave of affection, wings fluttering shyly. Creating magical constructs gave her a deep sense of satisfaction, and Cadance's unconditional praise warmed her heart.
"What's this?" barked an adult voice. Peeking out of their fort, they saw a guard scowling at them. "You're in so much trouble!" He pointed at the fort, and the wall it was attached to. "When Princess Celestia hears about this..."
Tempo's eyes widened as... Well, her heart didn't quicken. She didn't have one, but she could feel the tension. Had she ruined everything? "Please... I didn't mean..."
Cadance hugged her silently crying sister. "Don't be mean!"
The guard flinched back. "Mean?"
"Mean!" shouted Cadance, glaring at him. "She's still learning what she can do... and what she can do... Just... Just tell her."
The guard rubbed awkwardly behind his head. "Oh, um... Okay. Tempo?" Tempo looked up at him. "You are not allowed to make modifications to the castle. Do not do that again. Okay?"
"O-okay," got out Tempo weakly, shuffling her hooves together. "I'm sorry."
The guard smiled gently. "It's alright. Can you..." He pointed to the little extension Tempo had made. "Can you put that back where you found it, please?"
Tempo nodded hurriedly, blinking back anxious tears. She lit her horn again, levitating the boulders off the expanded fort walls and replacing them in their original grassy spots.
"I really am sorry," she mumbled. "I was just trying to help make Cadance happy." Her ears drooped. "I didn't know it was wrong..."
Cadance hugged Tempo's legs, gazing pleadingly up at the guard. "It's my fault too! But she wouldn'tve done it if I didn't ask for help with our fort. Please don't tell Auntie Celestia!"
The guard rubbed the back of his neck awkwardly. "There's no need for all that now. Just remember - no more castle modifications without clearance." He looked from one sad filly face to the other and sighed. "Tell ya what...how bout I show you the old fort in the barracks yard instead?"
He turned and beckoned them to follow towards the lower ramparts. There a collection of weather-worn towers and blockades stood, made of wood and stone. "All yours to play soldier ponies in if ya promise to leave the real castle walls alone from now on. Deal?"
Cadance gasped excitedly to Tempo. "This is way cooler anyway! Come on, let's claim the big tower!" She grabbed her sister's hoof, all woes instantly forgotten as she frolicked towards the crumbling but charming structures, their new domain.
Tempo followed gingerly behind, nerves still jangling from nearly getting them in monumental trouble. But the guard's warmth had left an impression on her - he cared more about understanding her intentions than punishing a foalish mistake. Maybe there was still hope an oddity like herself could find a place here too...
She stepped through an arched doorway into the spacious tower keep, gazing around at imaginary battles long faded now. Cadance's smiling face peeked out of various broken windows. "Our new fort!" the filly declared happily, and Tempo couldn't help smiling back. She may still have much to learn about restraining her powers, but at least she'd always fight to protect this precious sister of hers...
Glyph climbed to the very highest point. "I call this Fort Bravery!" He assumed the bravest stance he could think of. "Soldier Tempo!"
Tempo blinked, looking up at him. "I'm a soldier?"
"You are so long as you're in this fort." Glyph giggled with building warmth. "See to the repairs." He pointed at where little cracks had been forming. "I know you can do it, and we have permission, so no trouble this time."
Cadance stuck out her tongue. "She's my sister, don't boss her around."
"She's in the fort, she has to follow soldier commands." Glyph rolled his eyes. "That goes for all soldiers."
"Well..." Cadance got a scheming smile. "Then that goes for you too. Soldier Glyph, put up the flag."
"We don't... have a flag?"
Cadance raised a brow. "Then you'd better get one, Soldier Glyph. Soldiers have to follow orders."
"Yes, Ma'am," he deflated, defeated by his own logic. He scurried off in search of that flag.
Tempo giggled quietly as Glyph scampered off, before turning her attention to the crumbling fort walls. She lit her horn, magically sealing cracks and reinforcing weak points with smooth new stone.
Soon the tower stood firm and proud once more, flags flapping merrily from the ramparts where Glyph had managed to erect makeshift banners. Tempo gazed around their handiwork with satisfaction.
"All repaired for your approval, lieutenant," she reported to Cadance with a playful salute. She found herself settling comfortably into this fantasy role, a loyal soldier ready to bolster their company.
Cadance beamed, scampering over to inspect the fortifications. "Excellent work! Ah, but we must plan our defensive strategy as well." She leaned in conspiratorially. "I heard tale of a fearsome monster roaming these very woods."
She gestured to the shadowy trees encircling them. "As my second-in-command, we must protect Fort Bravery at all costs!" Splaying her tiny wings imperiously, she glared out at the forest like a commander sizing up enemy terrain.
Tempo instinctively moved closer to the filly, scanning the treeline for any sign of threats. "Don't worry sir, err, ma'am!" She lifted her chin. "I won't let anything happen to you or our noble fort."
She knew it was just foalish games, but some deeper part of her thrilled at the chance to be Cadance's protector again, phantom foes or no. If they were an imagination, Glyph showed no hint of it, glaring out at the thousand threats that faced them. "I say we should practice! We won't fight them off without being good fighters."
Cadance put a hoof to her chest. "I don't want to fight. Why can't we talk to them?"
Tempo inclined her head. "If they are monsters, it will be hard to... talk, sister."
Cadance's face fell at Tempo's matter-of-fact reply. "But Auntie Celestia says we must always seek peace before conflict," she protested.
She scuffed a hoof, glancing between Tempo and Glyph's determined expressions. They were ready to imaginarily battle whatever crossed their path, while she still clung to her ideals of harmony.
"What if the monster is actually nice and wants to be our friend?" Cadance tried hopefully. "Like in my favorite book where the little dragon just needed some love..."
She trailed off at their doubtful looks. Young as she was, the seeds of her talent for spreading love already showed in her endless faith and compassion.
Tempo stepped over to gently bump her shoulder. "You're right, we should give any new creature a chance," she conceded gently. "But we also need to be able to protect this place if needed. I promise though..."
She met Cadance's eyes. "I'll always try talking first before attacking. Okay?" It was the least she could do for her peace-loving sister.
Cadance's ears perked up. "Promise?" She held out her hoof eagerly. Tempo hesitated only a moment before twining their hooves and mirroring the motions of an oath. If it put that sunny smile back on Cadance's face, promise much anything...
‘Scuse me?
Equine creatures dont have arms, they have legs.
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Arms are the forelimbs of any creature.
Octupi have them. Horses have them. Your dog has them. Most animals you can imagine have them.
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The structural differences between an arm and a leg are crucial to their proper function: digits that flex and curl are needed in a hand for grasping while strong muscles in the legs allow for walking and running
Equines do not have flexible digits that flex and curl, therefore no arms. only legs.
Crossing her forelegs is what it should be, as foreleg and hind-leg are the correct terms.
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Also, using octopi as an example in a list of land mammals is like using fungi as an example of any plant life.
Wildly different anatomy, smh.
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And another thing!
Birds. Birds dont have arms. They have wings which evolved from arms, yes, but they aren't arms.
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You appear to be confusing arms, which have no flexible digits, for hands, which do.
Horses, and ponies, have no digits, and no hands.
They do have forelimbs, and thus have arms. They use them to hug one another in adorable displays.
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each of the two upper limbs of the human body from the shoulder to the hand.
Definition of an arm. It requires a hand, which requires flexible digits.
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https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/arm
I didn't make up these words, or their definitions. Birds have arms.
So does about every animal you'll ever see.
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Man. This is... an interesting debate... but an arm is the entirety of the forward limbs. A pony can cross their arms, which they have.
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Fuck it. Here ya go.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Equine_anatomy#:~:text=Skeletal%20system,-A%20horse's%20skeleton&text=Horses%20have%20205%20bones%2C%20which,%2C%20sternum%2C%20and%20ribs).
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And this too.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limbs_of_the_horse
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The argument is not, and never was, that there aren't other names for those bodyparts. Arms and forelimbs are just two examples. Both mean the same thing. To get anatomically correct you'd have to start listing multiple crossing bones, but nobody came here for anatomy lessons. They crossed their arms. This conjures the correct mental image.
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Im just debating for the sake of fun.
I mean no offense or anything, i just wanted to debate with someone.
My goal isn't to be correct, or prevent myself from being not.
My goal is simply to create chaos, the fun kind, not the negative.
I tire of this debate, so i concede.
Have a nice day, and i wish you much creativity.
Was that pinkie promise, not Pinkie promise?
Also, in earlier chapter you referred night as Luna's night, which confused me, because if this is pre-FiM, I don't think Luna was remembered by population in any kind except Nightmare Moon for the Nightmare night.
How old are the characters? Or what age range are they at least?
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Fixing mention of impossibilities.
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That were just sneaky typos crawling through
I do wonder how Cadence knows the Pinkie promise.
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Tweaked.
A cute chapter. The story is so much better now that you are taking your time and not rushing everything.
Hmmm, if Tempo is basically a golem, does she age? Or will she always look like filly Cadance?
Why did this feel like foreshadowing?
Tempo doesn’t want to play nice. She wants her kill counts
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An excellent question.
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Give it up!!
You are being annoying.
I enjoy reading your stories, dear author.
You have a knack for variations of HiE Human in Equestria.
I quite enjoyed your story from last year, about Roseluck and the human tenant. The one with Landlord Discord. I wish I could have bought a physical book at the time.
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I was having a debate, one which I have long since conceded, and you are the one being annoying bringing it back up.
I stopped being bothered by it, and you have no standing in a conversation that ended some time ago.
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A debate? You mean how you said in that final comment?
Where you said you were essentially trolling the author?
Yeah dude, not fun.
You were being a prick and got called out for it by a fellow reader, because anyone could see between the lines that the author was not having a good time.
He was being polite.
Even shitposters say they are "having fun".
Don't do it at someone else's expense.
That's all. Have a nice night.
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Ok
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Isn't that story by Starscribe?
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Drama
- Slice of Life
Tracy needed somewhere to stay, how was he supposed to know that it was in another universe? Now he'll somehow have to hold down a job on Earth while living as a pony in Equestria. It's either that, or say goodbye to being human.Or is there another one with the same premise?
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Bwahaha!!!!
ROFL, no wonder I was having problems finding it.
Lols, they both do a good job with the whole "Human in Equestria" trope, don't they? Or variations of, to be precise.
I seriously thought that was David Silver.
That made me laugh.
I wonder how long this author was scratching his head thinking, "In which one of Starlight's cursed timelines did I write that story..?"
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I was wondering which tale was being spoken of.
Wait... Why wouldn't she have a heart? She was a 1-for-1 clone.
Maybe it's not beating, which would be weird, but she was created to replace Cadence without being noticed. Not having a heartbeat or, you know, a heart would probably get noticed. Especially if her appearance as a pony only runs skin deep as this seems to be implying.
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It feels like you're so close. She was a doll made to look perfectly like Cadance. A heartbeat is not required to look just like someone.
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So she does have a heart then, just not a beating one. I can see her thinking she wouldn't because she doesn't have a heartbeat, but it should still physically be in there. Of course now I am questioning if her cells are even alive. This seems like a stasis locked clone type deal. She's up and moving, but her body isn't really experiencing the passage of time, which would lead into what another commenter speculated. She probably won't age. She's static, a snapshot of Cadence at the moment of her creation. That's why she can't really eat either. No digestion. I mean why would she? There's not any metabolic processes going on.
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You are confusing me. She is a doll. She is a golem. This has been firmly stated. She is a doll done up to look just like Cadance. She is not alive. She has no cells to be alive or dead.
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To be honest intro describe her more of a body double. Even the entire spiel about nature looking to fill empty spaces hints that she have at least a working brain. A living body, a functional vessel for the soul. Only starting from her dialogs with Celestia I started suspecting sometime isn't right.
Hm... I wonder is she going to actually ascend one day and get a proper body?
Besides, she had so be an extremely precise copy to work as a replacement for longer than 1-5 minute anywhere near the Celestia. Extremely dumb and suicidal sect of black mages, I suppose.
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She is some of those things. A soul was knocked off course and ended up here, that much was stated, it even...Almost gave spoilers.
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She might be both. A flesh golem, nailed up by magic of restricted school but remote control was wrenched out of villain's hooves and given to a free soul. Perhaps, Cadance's wish not be alone is at fault too.
*takes note* follows given directives without higher mental functions comprehending the underlying mechanisms... How must it feel to be piloting an advanced dumb machine while not knowing you're doing so?
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Little kids do the silliest things.