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Zap working herself to death is a bad idea. Besides her personal health, it's only a matter of time before she makes a mistake at the farm, on whether work, or during a Wonderbolts performance. ON TOP OF THAT! Being exhaust constantly makes her way less useful in stopping Dusk's insanity.
And that's the thing. Dusk isn't evil. He's just completely disconnected from reality at this point. Not caring how many families he breaks, JUST LIKE HIS OWN!
“Then eat up because even you have limits,” Spike said.
I LOVE that retort!
Even if she had infinite stamina, she can't alter the flow of time.
“Ya almost got erased!” Zap said firmly.
She has a very very VERY good point.
“Yes, they’re gonna act like spoiled foals, then they’ll be treated as such,” Zap said.
Indeed.
“Again, life isn’t fair, and if ah have ta be unfair to protect you three, then so be it,” Zap said.
Sounds like Blaze and Marine. (StH.)
AB said rubbing her hooves.
Beware, there are those who consider unspoken shorthands like that lazy typing.
we’ll find a way to return you three to normal eventually,
Zap... I hate to say it, but THIS IS normal for them now!
And Princesses? You girls haven't been ordained by anyone!
“Do ya really want to outlive yer friends?” Zap said.
Does Twinkle react to that?
Also, Celly and Lulu, Cadence, and Twilight have to face that as well.
Discord I can imagine is annoying at Big Mac being in his way... But figure once Charity becomes an Alicorn, she can just outlast him, and then Discord can make his move.
At least this didn't turn out to be another ambush. Honestly, after the last chapter, and a villain with mind control powers around, they'd have some means of identifying imposters and thralls.
Also considering that Chrysalis is out there somewhere.
“Ya mean ya chipped yer own sister with a spell?” Zap asked accusingly.
Lulu will be ticked off when she finds out, but at least will be understanding.
Why waste a wish on his home town like that? What does he get out of it? His obsession is on his family and neighbors, not the buildings they lived in.
how mad I am,”
Mad as in angry, or mad as in "stark raving mad"?
Shouldn't Celestia bloody tell them what this macguffin is and why she didn't just destroy it before?
but this isn’t your world at stake, leave it to me to do this,” Sunset said.
That hasn't stopped Sunset for fighting for Earth time and again.
“Don’t be sad Twinkle, we learned valuable info
I THOUGHT WE'D LEARN WHAT THE MACGUFFIN IS!
And WHY DID NONE OF THE PONIES ASK WHAT IT WAS?
WHY THE TARTARUS DID THAT JUST HAPPEN WITH THE CMC? WHY THEN?!
Dusk going to fuse ponies at random? Last time he was at least being careful as to make sure their traits complimented and enhanced each other.
Lots of twists with this chapter! Flash comes back! Way to go! Always willing to support his girls, that one. But what happened to Cheese? The CMC go from three alicorns to one! It's a Triceracorn!
Heh, Zap has enough strength to mare-handle three junior alicorns, but her centuries-old granny can still whack her hard enough to leave a dent! Ha!
Zap, Mac, and Applebloom are her granfoals. Their offspring would be her great-grandfoals.
BTW. I had the thought of putting clop in the story in the future, but I will leave that up to you guys, do you want to see them loving or just moderated love?
On one hand it might spoil the momentum of the story on the other hand it'll push the romance a bit higher.
So I leave it to you guys, should I or should I not?