An unscrupulous stallion is the only one in Equestria who knows how to get Celestia back -- the whole world hinges on him. And now his perverse plan for impregnating every mare he sees is unstoppable! Or is it?
Interesting, i'm very curious to see how this all will resolve. This reminds me a little bit of "The Heat Treatment" story of yours. I wonder now what fate will befall Dicey after all this ends haha
11701698 Well, Celestia is completely ruled out, since she's just a little ball right now. And Cadance ... Hm... I wonder if Crystal Empire citizens (much less royalty) are even bound by Luna's proclamation? It might actually be that Dicey has no power over anypony in the Crystal Empire, unless he can convince them independently to go along with the same deal.
11700139 yeah, I read 'sex-ed: changeling style' and was put off (not enough to drop it though), but that has 'romance' and 'slice of life' in the blue tags instead of 'dark' so ipso facto.... yeah nah
11701912 I meant to say that I had read it already, about a year ago. And I almost didn't read that chapter, but then a part of my mind decided that I was missing something possibly important. Mistakes were made, lol. Can't say I regret reading it, but it was rough.
Very conveniently off-screen, so I don't have to deal with that, lol! It would be such a headache that I'd probably have to dedicate an entire chapter to it ... and it wouldn't even be a sexy chapter, it would just be closing some plot holes! (Like that other plot hole of "Why doesn't Discord raise the sun?")
If the description is correct and this is only five chapters, it should be finishing up soon. I doubt we'll do all three days, and it wouldn't surprise me given how kinda dumb Dicey is.
"Take me back to Ponyville" Well give you are from there, they now have a general idea where to look for the orb. Then he flat out tells Fluttershy he has a cabin on the outskirts as well. That'd be a nice place to start looking and unless I accidently skipped a line where he relocated the orb. I'm pretty sure it's still underneath his floor boards.
Really REALLY dumb, but for everypony else that's really really good.
Okay setting aside that our main character is a whole bunch of things that are bad, I wanna really put some spot light on the descriptions and wording. A lot of times it's hard to get out of the repetitive word choice that we're used to, heck leech has that issue sometimes. But you've done a phenomenal job trying to change the words and not get sucked into the cycle, I really want to commend you on that. That takes a lot of self-awareness and skill.
I wonder how many of these mares will go for an abortion, and if not, hes gonna be worked to the bone with all that child support (assuming theres anything left of him post day 3...)
Interesting, i'm very curious to see how this all will resolve. This reminds me a little bit of "The Heat Treatment" story of yours. I wonder now what fate will befall Dicey after all this ends haha
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Time will tell. ^.^
Sad we not able to read how he gonna impregnate Celestia and Cadance
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Well, Celestia is completely ruled out, since she's just a little ball right now.
And Cadance ... Hm... I wonder if Crystal Empire citizens (much less royalty) are even bound by Luna's proclamation? It might actually be that Dicey has no power over anypony in the Crystal Empire, unless he can convince them independently to go along with the same deal.
Starlight mind controls him into telling them where the thing is.
Twilight and Shining Star get abortions.
The end.
Which is to say… something in that magic sure is doing a lot of heavy lifting in making ponies not search for ways around this.
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yeah, I read 'sex-ed: changeling style' and was put off (not enough to drop it though), but that has 'romance' and 'slice of life' in the blue tags instead of 'dark' so ipso facto.... yeah nah
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I hope you enjoy that one!
(But do yourself a favor and when you see the warning on Epilogue 1 that says you can skip it -- skip it.)
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But she promised not to do that anymore!
Spoilers!
Nice chapter keep it up.
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I meant to say that I had read it already, about a year ago.
And I almost didn't read that chapter, but then a part of my mind decided that I was missing something possibly important. Mistakes were made, lol.
Can't say I regret reading it, but it was rough.
At this rate, they're going to castrate him with a bear trap as soon as his three days are up.
So where’s Discord in all of this? Pretty sure he’d have been torturing the guy before he’d even be able to rape Fluttershy.
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Well, yes ... that is the entire point of a clopfic, isn't it?
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Oh... Sorry about that.
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No, use a spoon, so it'll hurt more!
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Very conveniently off-screen, so I don't have to deal with that, lol!
It would be such a headache that I'd probably have to dedicate an entire chapter to it ... and it wouldn't even be a sexy chapter, it would just be closing some plot holes! (Like that other plot hole of "Why doesn't Discord raise the sun?")
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Lol fair enough, he’d literally solve everything if he appeared and took even a single look at what’s going on
If the description is correct and this is only five chapters, it should be finishing up soon. I doubt we'll do all three days, and it wouldn't surprise me given how kinda dumb Dicey is.
"Take me back to Ponyville" Well give you are from there, they now have a general idea where to look for the orb. Then he flat out tells Fluttershy he has a cabin on the outskirts as well. That'd be a nice place to start looking and unless I accidently skipped a line where he relocated the orb. I'm pretty sure it's still underneath his floor boards.
Really REALLY dumb, but for everypony else that's really really good.
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You're getting awfully close there! ^.^
Okay setting aside that our main character is a whole bunch of things that are bad, I wanna really put some spot light on the descriptions and wording. A lot of times it's hard to get out of the repetitive word choice that we're used to, heck leech has that issue sometimes. But you've done a phenomenal job trying to change the words and not get sucked into the cycle, I really want to commend you on that. That takes a lot of self-awareness and skill.
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Thanks! ^.^ I put a lot of work into that.
I wonder how many of these mares will go for an abortion, and if not, hes gonna be worked to the bone with all that child support (assuming theres anything left of him post day 3...)
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That actually is kind of touched on in the final epilogue chapter.