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I forgot to turn off the translator, I didn't know that could happen, I thought I had the original language.

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Honestly, I'm just amazed and entertained by the idea that people are out there reading my stories in other languages, and I didn't even know it!

I wonder if anything gets lost in translation...

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In my experience this happens in some cases, but they are such small things that anyone with some intuition and common sense can continue reading without further complications.

Boy he is a disgusting pony, the worst is that he doesn't have any of the self-awareness or experience with other ponies to know or understand how how creepy he is being. Awesome chapter I love how you depicted how Shy felt about every casual words coming on as totally creepy to everyone around him. Looking forward to see what happens next.

This story is pretty dark. Because the sun isn't there. Ha.

This guy is so dead in 3 days.

Speaking of which, it'd sure be a shame if the royal chronometers ran a little fast.

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Yes, yes. A terrible shame, that.

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He COULD do that without the gender transformation, but then it wouldn't be as fun for ME. XD

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I'll let him know. ^.^

Really digging this story so far! I envy your diverse vocabulary and natural flow, let’s me know I’ve got a lot of room to improve on my own writing

Excited to see more!

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Thanks! ^.^ It's nice to know the attention I put into the prose is appreciated!

Man I hope there will be chapter dedicated to Rainbow comforting Flutters (prob not)

Also I'm pretty sure Rainbow wouldnt care in the slightest for the princess if it meant hurting Flutters like that
She would either try to escape or get that stallion killed

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Yeah, no full chapter of that, sorry. Though there is a bit of a scene of that in the next chapter.
And, yeah... In the transition between chapters 4-5, Rainbow finally does lose it, disregarding all orders.

I honetly can't wait to see what happens to this guy after the three days end.Surely he can't be that dumb as to assume nothing would happen to him
Speaking of which:in the first chapter it isn't stated that nothing will happen to him after the three days end, so I'm assuming there would be at least some consequences to his actions...right?

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