An unscrupulous stallion is the only one in Equestria who knows how to get Celestia back -- the whole world hinges on him. And now his perverse plan for impregnating every mare he sees is unstoppable! Or is it?
11702653 Yeah... But this fic would be 100,000 words long if all of them were on-screen. So I mainly just focused on the mares who the commissioner liked the most.
11702697 That might not be an option unless they can break the Wish spell. I’m fairly certain the reasoning behind why he’s been able to get away with so much is the Wish spell, it would explain why Discord hasn’t shown up and destroyed him. I would have preferred the MC not be a piece of garbage, instead some stallion who is forced to do all this because of the Wish spell but so long as this MC gets a fate similar to Justin Bieber on that episode of CSI, I’ll be happy.
11700140 To anyone who has ever played D&D, or is familiar with any non-Disney story about djinni, it was blatantly obvious. To be fair though, I can’t think of a way you could have made it less obvious.
11702653 11702659 I don't know if I'd would consider this a negative about off screen scenes or a positive on the writing that I want the off screen scenes in the first place but it's aways been a thing. Be it here with Starlight and the Spa Twins or many scenes in Sex Ed: Changeling Style (more than one scene of Flivvy was off screen) it always leaves me wanting more which I think edges out to be a positive.
Aw, was hoping Starlight wouldn't be offscreen. Oh well.
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Yeah... But this fic would be 100,000 words long if all of them were on-screen. So I mainly just focused on the mares who the commissioner liked the most.
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That might not be an option unless they can break the Wish spell. I’m fairly certain the reasoning behind why he’s been able to get away with so much is the Wish spell, it would explain why Discord hasn’t shown up and destroyed him. I would have preferred the MC not be a piece of garbage, instead some stallion who is forced to do all this because of the Wish spell but so long as this MC gets a fate similar to Justin Bieber on that episode of CSI, I’ll be happy.
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To anyone who has ever played D&D, or is familiar with any non-Disney story about djinni, it was blatantly obvious. To be fair though, I can’t think of a way you could have made it less obvious.
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For somebody who doesn't watch CSI ... what fate was that?
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He gets shot over a dozen times after trying to pull a gun on over a dozen cops
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I don't know if I'd would consider this a negative about off screen scenes or a positive on the writing that I want the off screen scenes in the first place but it's aways been a thing. Be it here with Starlight and the Spa Twins or many scenes in Sex Ed: Changeling Style (more than one scene of Flivvy was off screen) it always leaves me wanting more which I think edges out to be a positive.