How would a Soldier of Overwatch handle the loss of his squad? And of Overwatch? Will he live the rest of his life in isoaltion or will the Ponies break down the barriers that the Combine installed? And restore what was removed by the alien empire.
That was a marked improvement from the previous chapter. This story sure is coming along well. Your grasp of fight scenes could be improved but is pretty damn good already. Be proud, my friend.
11575489 Oh no, you handled those parts quite adequately, there were just a few points where the pacing was a bit off, but that's a very small nitpick admittedly.
While he drifted off to sleep. for the first time, in a long, long time. 860 had a peaceful sleep.
Rest In Peace combine soldiers, you may have been an enemy, but you were or still are human, so be at peace 860 teammates o7 you were one of the few good combines.
I'll be honest, I fully expected this story to be bad, I didn't think the crossover would work but damn did you make it work. Well done absolutely love it 👍.
same to you but please, dontr overwork yourself.
ah, poor royal guards, just doing their jobs...
but seeing apple bloom at the start, gave me a chuckle out of irony. pardon, old habit
I always found the euphemistic language of the combine to be amusing
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Re-education means just getting the crap kicked out of you or shocked.
That was a marked improvement from the previous chapter. This story sure is coming along well. Your grasp of fight scenes could be improved but is pretty damn good already. Be proud, my friend.
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I guess the only reason why it's good is because Luna's horn became a fruity pin cushion?
Don't forget Luna at this point of the story is still regaining her powers and the storm didn't help either party.
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Oh no, you handled those parts quite adequately, there were just a few points where the pacing was a bit off, but that's a very small nitpick admittedly.
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Better than what could have happened.
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Rest In Peace combine soldiers, you may have been an enemy, but you were or still are human, so be at peace 860 teammates o7 you were one of the few good combines.
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And oh boy I really hope that Luna sees that the crimes, were a measured response to him waring them to stay back.
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Also next chapter when?
yaaaaaaaaay more
I'll be honest, I fully expected this story to be bad, I didn't think the crossover would work but damn did you make it work. Well done absolutely love it 👍.
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Only the dead have seen the end of war, RIP lads.