very nice, good reference of alyx and loved the petting part.

Also, interesting take on CP Identification and other duties, that was what i was always wondering. do you have more civil protection planned?

but...in the flashback, your upper case is messed up.

11597046
It's a possibility.

Plus the reason why I left it as 'Civil Protection' is because to me reading it with both words capitalized makes it sound more important

11597053
right, I just meant how you gave them numbers at first.

And the upper case, i noticed you started some paragraphs lowercase or writer upper after a comma when it should be lower, no offense.

Just a friendly question, think you good or do you need more CP officers?

11597057
Well there was a group of CP's so instead of giving them all numbers I just said what I said😅

I fixed the uppercase lower case issue though 👍

11597066
okay and you're welcome.

about the CP officers, pardon, just thought I might be able to help if you need more with designations/backgrounds

11597076
Just Dm me! So we can talk about it I won't discourage some counsel about it

11597109
i always enjoy a good talk. Its just a old habit with the comments, you know?

11597112
No problem

11597116
good and sent

I thought the combine had their eyes replaced with orange or blu the lenses. Of course if you decided to change that bit of detail thats fine, just curious.

I wonder how fast our Combie will learn new language and Twilight (possibly) losing her mind over over combines bluntness and not realky talkative nature.

Well either way I eagerly await more.

11597151
She's more or less going to be trying to teach a brick wall how to speak her language.

11597160
Hahaha, oh man can't wait to read that. Ironic that his unit is designated spike 'wall', guess he'll live up to the name.

11597163
That along with him being a walking tank

860 can fight a manticore on his own.

11597164
Yeah combine soldier units are no joke with all the augments and wat not.

That's another interesting thin. How will the ponies react to his heavy altered and inhanced biology. They pobably won't even know that he is altered though, with no comparison to normal human.

11597167
You're getting ahead of yourself relax

11597168
Sorry i tend to think like this when i start to turn gears in my head.

I will just patiently wait and let myself be surprised.

11597171
That's better.

11609805
Nah I'm just saying it would make sense since blue fire is hotter

11644580
Yeah I see what your getting at but sadly no she doesn't blush blue

when next chapter?

11670079
It will be ready when it's ready I have been busy sorry for making you wait but life has a priority over this especially since I'm not making a penny off of any of my stories

11670266
Understandable, as a writer who has written almost as many words as there are in this story I understand that it takes time, when I wrote that comment I was tried, so sorry for that, just the story's pretty good, and is one of the few half decent half life fanfics, with the only thing being missing is Gordon freeman

Please update

Loving this story so far hope you keep writing.

Folding her ears, Luna spoke up. " Then how do we fix what I had sabotaged? Do I need to offer, something of equal value?" Luna blushed, which made her older sister frown. Knowing what she was talking about.

Say what?

The Solar princess offered but. Starshine refused, "No no! I'll take on the added response abilities, with no trouble; your Highness." Starshine quickly answered, wanting him all to herself for ear scratches.

Yes no pony can resist the ear scratches from a human