A man with only enough memory to recognize his new body is not his own is thrust into a new world with more power than he ever believes he wanted. He will need to get use to his new body, new customs, and new abilities as Fecto Elfilis.
Page generated in 0.021 seconds
Total duration
703 users online
671,179 hits today, 2,107,360 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Yes! Let Chaos consume you!
Damn this was good...
Derail implies that this is where it goes bad and off track, good sir/ma’am, we were never in a track to begin with!
Hah toby sounds like he's high
Well, of course.... I hope that this will not be from the category where the hero helps the OS, they have love-carrots and everything, it's just that it's already boring
11346306
love-carrots?
This expression is(In the original it sounds like любовь-морковь)
That’s great XD
11346319
Took me a bit to figure it out. Don't worry, i've read those too, I'm not gonna just "Boom, Changeling reform. Lovey lovey ensues."
Will my story have similarities? well duh we're all on fimfiction after all, but I am trying to deviate from the norm and do something at least a little new, if not totally original.
Shining:
Great chapter, love the interactions between Toby, Cadence and Shining.
Also Frontline's reveal was unexpected.
Toby all,
May the Fourth Wall be without you.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
11346512
Thank you. I'm doing my best
I had a feeling Frontline was a changeling and this Chapter proved that I was right. This Fimfiction just got a whole lot more interesting.
Can't say I didn't see this coming. Still, Celestia need to address the problems with her guards sooner or later.
Let's hope she is not related to Chrysalis. Most lings from the Queen Cheese's hive don't have much of good intention.
The future Guard Captain was afraid of a small, cuddlable pink ball? He need to grow some backbone.
...*balances on head in confusion.*
Good sir, this isn't merely derailing.
You've pulled a Flight of the Phoenix and scared the pegasi.
The thing is a True Blood killer I would never trust the pink ball.
So that's how it's gonna be... Well I hope it's juicy!
Calling it before I continue reading, she is a changeling.
11348610
Yer a wizard, Harry
Just look at it as training for the future Shining.
So Chrysalis is a Hippocratic? Why am I not surprised.
That ending just left me in stitches. Lmao
11354255
All the Element Bearers are as well.
11392836
what?
11354255
don't you mean hypocrite and why do you say that?
Huh.. wasn't expecting that.. though cadence's and the thing makes sense
11346568
I would be afraid of the "small, cuddlable pink ball" too
Like... why is the "small, cuddlable pink ball" that defeated a pile of Royal Guards giggling at a wall? Makes me think this isn't our lovable Kirby.